Question

Please tell me what you guys think of this.
I'm open to any suggestions!! c:

Answer 1

I will read this note every night.


Wherever you are, you will be able to listen to my voice whispering to your ears.


I will cover your dreams with these sweet words. You won´t be cold anymore cause I am willing to give you a huge hug in order to keep you warm.


In silence, I will turn off the light. I will lay down by your side. I will make you hold on to me.


All in a sudden, I will reveal your inner. I will make it mine inch by inch. Don´t complain about this passionate way of feeling because you generate it babe, only you …


Tonight, I will tell you many secrets. You will be my listener and my guesser. You will be allowed to ask for everything you want to know. Indeed, I will open up my heart.


So, you will be aware of the truth. I belong to you. I am always yours, whenever you want to feel me close. What is more, I will make you touch my heart. I want you to experience the infinite tenderness there is in me.


Then, you will seek for my unquenchable willing to love you, again and again …


I will re read this missive each passing night time. I will stroke your face so softly you hardly ever perceive it.


While you sleep, I will wrap your soul in my hand.


You won´t toss tonight. Nobody will disturb your sleeping anymore cause I will make you fall asleep in my arms from now on …

Answer 2

... I am... awe-struck this is quite interesting and beautiful.

Answer 3

Reminds me of my lost love...

Answer 4

Awww, thank you so much! Any suggestions?

Answer 5

I have none... this is truly beutiful.

Answer 6

I like it.

Answer 7

Thank you. :)

Answer 8

This is truly amazing!!

Answer 9

Great work. ^_^

Answer 10

Thank you. ^-^

Answer 11

It's beautiful!!!! I'm reading someone to read it.... @logan420

Answer 12

*tagging
It's really really good!!!! I mean it was genuine and deep,I loved it. I wish I could write stuff on that level. You should check out my stuff when you get the chance.

Answer 13

Thank you!! and I'll have to check it out some time. :)

Answer 14

Thanks

Answer 15

This is so deep and beautiful @dopeness_ it really really just made me smile!
You have a deep poetic sense within you that really is outstanding and glorious here!!
Wow wow! ♥

Answer 16

Wow!! Thank you soooo much!! :) and I'm glad it made you smile! ^-^

Answer 17

Your sooo very welcome! ♥