Something else I wrote. ^-^ Hope you enjoy! c:
To love you is like to write the most beautiful piece of poetry To love you is like to find the very accurate words to let my heart speak To love is like to find the road that leads to happiness To love you is like to make up excuses so as to meet you anywhere To be with you is like to stop the passage of time Because your love is my measure, my time, my everything To love you is like to sing the sweetest song To love you is like to take care of you, in distance To love is like to bare my soul each time I look at you Cause my stare reveals such an infinite tenderness To love you is like to find a new color in the rainbow To love is like to walk in a sunny season for good To love you is to pray God for the most sublime intention To love you is like to fly and touch the seventh heaven To love is like to understand what the purpose of my life is…
Ohh, thank you.
Shush. xD
lol
lol that was good doe tbh :P
Thank you, Naate. cx
NICE!!!! :D
Thank you!! ^-^
Really good ^.^
Thank you!! :)
no problem ^.^
I like how you interjected a metaphor after two-to-seven lines of similes; I was kind of wondering why there weren't more metaphors, at first. I felt you were going for a specific style, but I thought a metaphor every now-and-then would keep the poem from getting stale. Nice work!
Wonderful job @dopeness_ ^_^
Great job!
Thank you guys! :) Means a lot to me. ^~^
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