Question

uhm,made a new song. "I'm Drowning" sorry nut that gud,opinions would be appreciated ^-^

Answer 1

I’m drowning
I’m sinking to the bottom of the ocean,
I scream and shout but they can’t hear a word spoken,
What is causing all this emotion inside of me,
I’m drowning in depression,
I tried to change who I am now people will remember me with a bad impression,
I never been showed affection,
Now I’ll die knowing I never knew what it felt like,
Why want anyone rescue me,
No use probably lost somewhere in the sea,
I wish I knew what it felt like to have friends,
I wish I knew what it felt like to have endless laughs,
I never found my path,
Guess I’ll knew know,
My body is floating low, only so much I can say so,
I have water gushing out of my mouth,
All the lies
the pain
the sorrow,
It’s drowning me,
I’ll remember the sorrow,
Like it’s no tomorrow,
I just want to say I’m sorry
My eye sight is blurry,
I’ve always been worried,
That I’ll never live to tell the story,
What is love,
These chains I’m not free of,
My time is almost up,
Why can’t I live just a little longer wish I was still in my bed,
With my mom saying wake up,
I wanted you to see me grownup,


(Chorus)
Why don’t you come rescue me,
Why don’t you,
Why don’t you,
Show me this world I never see,
Why don’t you
Why don’t you
Why can’t you rescue me,
I’m drowning in this sea.
So please
Rescue,
Me.
No one ever rescued me then so why would they now,
I told you I would always be there for you I took that vow,
But how about now,
Where are you,
Gasp gasp I can’t breathe,
Why can’t no one ever see me,
It’s like I’m invisible,
I made mistakes I felt horrible,
You said these things aren’t fixable,
See I learn things even when it’s not in a good way,
Good things don’t happen to me anyways,
(Chorus)
Why don’t you come rescue me,
Why don’t you,
Why don’t you,
Show me this world I never see,
Why don’t you
Why don’t you
Why can’t you rescue me,
I’m drowning in this sea.
So please
Rescue,
Me.
Why don’t you come rescue me,
Why don’t you,
Why don’t you,
Show me this world I never see,
Why don’t you
Why don’t you
Why can’t you rescue me,
I’m drowning in this sea.
So please
Rescue,
Me.
I still haven’t been rescued

Answer 2

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Answer 3

AMAZING!! great job Matt! <3

Answer 4

it is amazing and pretty much the story of my
life

Answer 5

I believe this is really good, with a lot of emotion in it, but as feedback, I would like to know what is the tempo?

Answer 6

On average.

Answer 7

sounds so depressing... :( but a form of art in itself I must say

Answer 8

um,kinda hard to explain,and mhm i make songs based on how i'm feeling ^-^

Answer 9

hmmm

Answer 10

same thats why most of the songs that i wrote are never shown to anyone

Answer 11

well its great to share your feelings, glad your doing so now. Hope you guys feel better soon.

Answer 12

Most of the time when I'm feeling down I like to pray and do things that I enjoy

Answer 13

when im sad i blare black veil brides and other bands and draw or hit things with my bat

Answer 14

When I'm down, well I stay down. No fixing me.

Answer 15

i love it @NekoMatt its really good

Answer 16

Great work.

Answer 17

it really good matt

Answer 18

@antanasia220

Answer 19

OMG I love it Matt *wipes tears out of my eyes*

Answer 20

Pretty good bro. Keep it up. Keep on writing amazing music and speak out to the audience around you. That's what my musical goal is. I write music based off of real experiences or common issues with societies acceptable traits (that are more often rejected rather than accepted). We don't write that to get attention we write that music to help guide people through troubling times in their lives. Rather it's being accepted around their friends and family or suffering from some kind of mental illness. We write what we of A Burning Masquerade go through. You keep being great. As a wise person who I'm trying to find when I go back to GA once told me to "stay golden" I'm telling you the same. Stay Golden.

Answer 21

good job

Answer 22

nice :3