I made a history RAP that I needed to make for my assignment is it good? i kinda suck at writing song could i get some feedback?

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oregonduck · Answer

I am not that good but here it is:
Go to the west
they got the cheap land
and new brands
religious freedom
god never fails just follow the Oregon trail
you can get a fresh start to a new life
economic growth from new businesses of any type
mild weather and rich soil
compared to here they seem spoiled
you can meet native Americans that settled there
they are different but don't be scared
a main danger on your journey over to the west is the risk of getting disease that could lead to death