Question

New Poem>> Tell me what you think :)

Answer 1

finding myself

One day I'll find myself, among the seas, mountains and trees.
I'll find my spirit through time and expertise.
I will no longer feel lost.
I will have found my train of thought.
In my hidden paradise, I will no longer have to role the dice.
The empty void will be filled.
Eventually, I won't even need that pill.
Soon I will find my purpose in this great endeavor.
And I'll place my forever.
Amongst the clouds, hidden in shrouds, I will find my crowd.
I'll finally fit in.
We'll feel like we're kin.
I'll laugh loudly.
And I'll shout proudly.
With this joy, I will finally feel that aching void.
One day it will come, my little identity high in the rungs.
With fresh breath in my lungs, I will have become...
One with elegant tongue
And beauty beyond measure
I will not feel insecure
No, not ever.
I will be proud of my wealth, that I have finally found myself.

Answer 2

Good job! I really enjoyed reading this ^.^

Answer 3

This is really good!! :)

Answer 4

@YoungStudier @dopeness_ I'm glad you liked it!!

Answer 5

I enjoyed reading it:)

Answer 6

@Hope210 :) thank you