Question

Here is my new poem call By My Side. Any and all feedback is accepted and appreciated.

Answer 1

Observing
What’s been done
This world full of
Terrifying futures
And pasts that harm

Metal
Sliding against metal
Sending shivers over all
Fibers of my being
Triggering the alarm

Clinging
Keeping my sanity
Chained deep inside
Under rampaging insanity
Not touching my charm

Devil
Knocking at my door
Should I let him in?
Oh how I adore
His rageful electrical storm

Starving
Only one around
To offer me disorder
Fueling my rage
Enabling me to harm

Answer 2

Nice work. ^_^

Answer 3

I like it ^-^