Question

Can someone help me edit a poem I just made?

Answer 1

Observing
What’s been done
This world full of
Terrifying futures
And pasts that harm

Metal
Sliding against metal
Sending shivers over all
Fibers of my being
Triggering the alarm

Clinging
Keeping my sanity
Chained deep inside
Under rampaging insanity
Not touching my charm

Devil
Knocking at my door
Should I let him in?
Oh how I adore
His rageful electrical storm

Starving
Only one around
To offer me disorder
Fueling my rage
Enabling me to harm

Answer 2

This Poem Is Nice Why Edit?

Answer 3

I posted this to see if it needed edits. And if so, then I was wondering if someone could help

Answer 4

Thanks tho

Answer 5

no prob