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OpenStudy (4everaddicted2anime):

Can someone help me edit a poem I just made?

OpenStudy (4everaddicted2anime):

Observing What’s been done This world full of Terrifying futures And pasts that harm Metal Sliding against metal Sending shivers over all Fibers of my being Triggering the alarm Clinging Keeping my sanity Chained deep inside Under rampaging insanity Not touching my charm Devil Knocking at my door Should I let him in? Oh how I adore His rageful electrical storm Starving Only one around To offer me disorder Fueling my rage Enabling me to harm

OpenStudy (chrisisdope1):

This Poem Is Nice Why Edit?

OpenStudy (4everaddicted2anime):

I posted this to see if it needed edits. And if so, then I was wondering if someone could help

OpenStudy (4everaddicted2anime):

Thanks tho

OpenStudy (chrisisdope1):

no prob

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