Plz give feedback, I just wrote this for my friend (it's supposed to be lyrics for a rap)
May I have your attention please?
I'm not afraid (I'm not afraid)
To Fly (to Fly)
Everybody (everybody)
Come take my brain (come take my brain)
We'll walk through life together, through the storm
Whatever weather, cold or warm

His eyes are heavy, his forhea'd's sweaty
There's food on his t-shirt already, it's Mo's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to Fly,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,

And I am, weak
If I wasn't, then why would I say I am

Question

Plz give feedback, I just wrote this for my friend (it's supposed to be lyrics for a rap)
May I have your attention please? 
I'm not afraid (I'm not afraid)
To Fly (to Fly)
Everybody (everybody)
Come take my brain (come take my brain)
We'll walk through life together, through the storm
Whatever weather, cold or warm

His eyes are heavy, his forhea'd's sweaty
There's food on his t-shirt already, it's Mo's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to Fly,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,

And I am, weak
If I wasn't, then why would I say I am

thewiselord · Answer

Haha, I recognize these lyrics, the site you got this from sucks. You should use rappad, it makes far more sense.

vsvampires309 · Answer

ok, thanks