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OpenStudy (atrineas):

Just a random limerick I wrote thoughts please. . .

OpenStudy (atrineas):

Her life was full of lost souls She had saved them making them whole But who would save her down here She was lost and forgotten wanting nothing but to disappear Until one day her cries were heard by a fallen angel who had taken control

OpenStudy (scarlettfarra2000):

Why does this poem remain me of City of Fallen Angels and City of Lost Souls?

OpenStudy (scarlettfarra2000):

It's still a good poem

OpenStudy (atrineas):

Thanks @ScarlettFarra2000 ^^

OpenStudy (scarlettfarra2000):

Welcome

OpenStudy (mysticfury):

im not really a fan of poems, was that was an amazing one! very full of emotion and it really made me smile, maybe you should be a poet if you made that wonderful piece up of the top of your head :D

OpenStudy (mysticfury):

but* not what

OpenStudy (atrineas):

thanks ^~^

OpenStudy (mysticfury):

good work, theres a medal!

OpenStudy (nyemc):

Its good:)

OpenStudy (skyvoltage):

nice job i like it

OpenStudy (atrineas):

Thanks ^~^

OpenStudy (atrineas):

So it's not that bad?

OpenStudy (skyvoltage):

no i like it

OpenStudy (studio-games):

Very nice. I thought limericks were supposed to be funny and uplifting though?

OpenStudy (scarlettfarra2000):

I'm not sure

OpenStudy (ojal26):

It's a good poem. c: I liked it a lot.

OpenStudy (atrineas):

Thanks ^~^ @ojal26

OpenStudy (scarlettfarra2000):

What do you think @NyeMc

OpenStudy (nyemc):

oh i said it was good

OpenStudy (scarlettfarra2000):

oh sorry

OpenStudy (nyemc):

its fine it really is good though

OpenStudy (lizardking2072):

What made you come up with that? It's really good, and it seems really deep personally

OpenStudy (atrineas):

@Lizardking2072 Some one needed help writing a poem so I just put my own feelings within the words and when I finished this is what I got. . . and Thank you

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