Just a random limerick I wrote thoughts please. . .
Her life was full of lost souls She had saved them making them whole But who would save her down here She was lost and forgotten wanting nothing but to disappear Until one day her cries were heard by a fallen angel who had taken control
Why does this poem remain me of City of Fallen Angels and City of Lost Souls?
It's still a good poem
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im not really a fan of poems, was that was an amazing one! very full of emotion and it really made me smile, maybe you should be a poet if you made that wonderful piece up of the top of your head :D
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good work, theres a medal!
Its good:)
nice job i like it
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So it's not that bad?
no i like it
Very nice. I thought limericks were supposed to be funny and uplifting though?
I'm not sure
It's a good poem. c: I liked it a lot.
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What do you think @NyeMc
oh i said it was good
oh sorry
its fine it really is good though
What made you come up with that? It's really good, and it seems really deep personally
@Lizardking2072 Some one needed help writing a poem so I just put my own feelings within the words and when I finished this is what I got. . . and Thank you
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