Choose the clearest and most effective revision of the following sentence.

Ready to give her speech, the woman stepped up to the microphone holding her note cards.

Question

Choose the clearest and most effective revision of the following sentence.

Ready to give her speech, the woman stepped up to the microphone holding her note cards.

anonymous · Answer

put the rest of it pls

anonymous · Answer

hi mod

mathmale · Answer

I see two adverbial clauses here.  Can you identify them?  Rearranging the three parts of this sentence would make it more effective.  Identify those parts and then try rearranging them.

mathmale · Answer

Hint:  The two adverbial ... or adjective ... clauses modify the subject, "woman."   What does the sentence tell you about the woman?