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Could someone please check my research paper for punctuation, wording, or mistakes I may have made please?

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i can

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Sure one sec

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Warning it isn't finish bit I'm out of time

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ok

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My teacher told me to never use first or second person (I or you).

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There is still a big what “if” to getting cancer you can’t really be sure why you got it if your health.
Run on sentence

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it looks good :D but then again that me and im not so good at papers

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Really is that what I've been doing? I mean I'm not even sure if I'm doing this right I can into school late

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There is still a big what “if” to getting cancer, you can’t really be sure.

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This is a research paper, never use second person

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Cancer beings when cells in a part of the body start growing out of control.
begins

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Pretend you are writing a....newspaper

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this sentence sounds like a run on

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column

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@emily867 nope

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hope that helps , it sounds great though good job

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I have more to add later this is all I have for now

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fan me if u ever need other questions I'm here a lot.

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Okay

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Cancer could be prevent (maybe) if everyone took a step into improving their health.
should be
Cancer could be prevented (maybe) if everyone took a step into improving their health.

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A person could be diagnose with cancer every minute and cancer is a serious problem.
should be
A person could be diagnosed with cancer every minute and cancer is a serious problem.

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When you get cancer your body loses that control of telling your cells that its time to stop growing.
should be
When you get cancer your body loses that control of telling your cells that it's time to stop growing.

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Your body looks for mistake errors or mutation your DNA repairs though mutations.
should be
Your body looks for mistake errors or mutation your DNA repairs through mutations.

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Also many other genes mutations can contribute to causing cancer.
Should be
Also, many other genes mutations can contribute to causing cancer.

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Those were just a couple of grammar thoughts.

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Okay, thank you so much

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You should put this on a google doc so everyone can give suggestions/comments

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Getting cancer can take decades to get that's why people older than 65 or older get cancer often. It's more common for older adults, to get cancer but you can get cancer at any age.

Certain lifestyle choices are known to increase you risk of cancer faster. Things like smoking, drinking (more than you should), frequent sunburns, being obese and having unsafe sex could contribute cancer.

A small part of people (a really small part) getting cancer comes from inherited condition. If cancer is common in your family, it's possible that mutations are being passed from generation to the next.

And @anthonyym I would love to but my google docs suck

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This is what I meant to add to the paper @RhondaSommer

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And thank you everyone that helped me

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@Atrineas

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It's not long enough it's got to be three pages long :(

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I don't know what to do looks like you already have your answers. . .

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Oh. . .

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It's like 10% of finals too

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mmmm. . .
*I don't know what to do >~<*

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I know yoou are

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Okay okay

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Certain lifestyle choices are known to increase you risk of cancer faster.
should be
Certain lifestyle choices are known to increase your risk of cancer faster.

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A small part of people (a really small part) getting cancer comes from inherited condition.
should be
either:
A small part of people (a really small part) getting cancer comes from an inherited condition.
or
A small part of people (a really small part) getting cancer comes from the inherited condition.

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What grade are you in? Are you in online school like k12?

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Im in k12 9th grade and ive had a research paper looking to yours and i turned it in and got an F. My mistakes where coming up with my own opinion not stating facts. I did not site my work. i did not listen to my teachers instructions. So i had to rewrite my whole paper. I reread her instructions and followed then and got a B. So my advice to you is just ask your teacher for help if you really need it he/she will have no problem in doing so, trust me.

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Yeah I'm not done with it but thank you

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It's got to be three pages long and yeah I'm having a hard time siting my work

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None of these people really know what your teachers expectations are for the paper. It would save you alot of trouble by just asking her. No problem :)

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Yea mine was 3 pages too had to write it in MLA format.

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Is it sad that I don't know what MLA format is? I always get in trouble for not doing that but I just don't understand the format

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One moment I'll send MLA formatting

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Saammmmmeee!! This video helped me alot https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Qf8AfiCcD4

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Youtube is blocked on the laptops me and Scar are using

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I'm using my school laptop can't watch the video

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Oohhhh this link my teacher gave me. What school do you go to? https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/05/

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Youngker

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Youngker high school

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Oh ive never heard of it.

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it depends on were you live

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Neither have I until I moved to Buckeye 6-7 years ago

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Im in California do you guys want to see my research paper so you could get an idea of what one is supposed to look like?

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Yeah that would be nice if you still have it

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It's mostly up to you but that would be very nice

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Okay let me try

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Thanks ^~^

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You're Welcome :)

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Thank you @narissa your a lifesaver

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okay saved

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to*

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Yeah

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Done

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Alright hope you girls have a nice night or day. I have to go bye! :)

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Um @narissa @Atrineas is a boy . . . and thanks a lot for all your help I'm still I'll get a better grade now

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Oh im so so sorry :|

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It's okay happens to the best of us

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Yea i get called a boy a lot.

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yea so do I

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Yea lol its annoying. I gtg lol bye guys and gals :)

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Okay I'll let you go then

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Oh! i forgot to tell you make sure you put it in MLA format or it will take off points on your research paper. I can show you step by step how to do it i you would like. I have to get off in like 30 min

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Um I can't tonight how about to tomorrow? @narissa

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Okay just tag me :)

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Well do so

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*will*