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This is my new song i performed at my school its called Realize tell me what you guys think

Yea this battle that's fought within is hard to overcome... people leaving you your friends dying on you how can a person even handle this.
Man i just gotta say something...

it's crazy that people go to sleep every night and cry themselves to sleep they are too scared to speak up because no one lets them speak they are crying and dying on the inside and we don't even see it ...why are we even doing this it's destroying them yet people do it anyway it's breakin them down till they have nothing left... they are covered in blood and tears we need to stop this its getting out of hand man… Why do you even do this… What would you do? If everybody hated you. But they don't know what you been through they can't even relate to you. God I'm asking for you to forgive me,
I'm begging for mercy, I want to feel this weight lifted off, yet i've been cursed whoever gets hurts will surely hurt me I feel that pain! I feel different now i think i finally understand things differently now... what i have been doing is wrong i hate this feeling because i'm experiencing it now no one likes me why cause i'm different all the things you have done to me turned me deranged Now I'm burning in the flames All the things you have said, I'm been thinking about them in my head I used to have so many people that
I thought I could trust But when it came to saving me You let me destruct i'm on my knees begging for this pain to go away it's hard dealing with life man i need to get away maybe all i'm experiencing is just a dream what happened to perfect what happened to everyone we thought we could trust where do we even fit in this life is a blur man were all fighting for the same cause we need to learn how to accept each other for who we are why do we tear everyone down for being different it's crazy how we can live with it man i'm done with this i need to take a stand i'm a man of that believes me can do anything but we just need to follow the right path that's given to us take my hand and we can go far…

Answer 1

Cool bro

Answer 2

And Deep

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Thanks medal me you guys

Answer 4

Oh my goodness, I really like that. It actually speaks the god damned truth.

Answer 5

it was amazeing what kind of music u going to play with it

Answer 6

It was Great :)

Answer 7

wow!! You have talent :) I really liked it. the feels

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WONDERFUL

Answer 9

such sad ;-;

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(•ω•)

Answer 11

omg no way that is amazing and so cool @HyperPiper is right it does speak the truth

Answer 12

The song is great but it's also sad

Answer 13

wow it explains me in every word i love it keep writing this nearly made me cry cuz i have a hard past and i used to cut a lot everyday and its still hard to not pick up that knife sometimes but this song is absolutly amazing i loved it

Answer 14

it inspires and its true not sad but true i have 37 different songs ive wrote and this song is similar to a couple of them is you have any more songs tag me i'd love to hear/read them

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if you have not is you have

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Answer 19

nice

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medal me everyone

Answer 21

i did already 

Answer 22

Thats for the people that havent

Answer 23

Wonderfully made ^~^
@RobertOK

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Nice