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@KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 Umm i'm not sure if u can help me with project @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 But i just need an explanation to it, so i can start @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014

Answer 1

chronological order
spatial order
general to particular
particular to general
comparison/contrast

Your selection of a method will depend on your purpose. If, for example, you decide to write a narrative paragraph, you will use chronological order. Descriptive paragraphs are usually developed using spatial order. The other methods are most often used in expository paragraphs.

Choose one of the following titles as a prompt for a topic (or use another, teacher-approved topic).

1. One Long Hour
2. The Advantage of _________ over _________
3. The Room
4. There's a Need for _________ Today

As you write and revise, ask yourself these questions:

1. Do all of the sentences in this paragraph belong here? (unity)
2. Are all of the sentences in this paragraph in the right place? (coherence--method of development)
3. Are all of the sentences in this paragraph smoothly connected together into a whole paragraph? (coherence--use of transitional devices)

Once you've made certain that your paragraphs are both unified and coherent, edit your work for problems in grammar and mechanics before submitting it to your teacher.

Answer 2

What type of paragraph do you want to write? An narrative, descriptive or expository?

Answer 3

I have no idea, what each of them means :3

Answer 4

Okay, ill give you the definitions:

Expository Writing: Expository writing is a subject-oriented writing style, in which the main focus of the author is to tell you about a given topic or subject, and leave out his personal opinions. He furnishes you with relevant facts and figures and does not include his opinions. This is one of the most common type of
writing styles, which you always see in text books and usually “How –to” articles, in which the author tells you about a given subject, as how to do something.

Descriptive Writing: Descriptive writing is a style of writing which focuses on describing a character, an event or a place in great details. It is sometimes poetic in nature in which the author is specifying the details of the event rather than just the information of that event happened.

Persuasive Writing: Persuasive writing, unlike „Expository Writing‟, contains the opinions, biasness and justification of the
author. Persuasive writing is a type of writing which contains justifications and reasons to make someone believe on the point the writer is talking about. Persuasive writing is for persuading and convincing on your point of view. It is often used in complain letters, when you provide reasons and justifications for your complaint; other copy-writing texts, T.V commercials, affiliate marketing pitches etc. are all different types of persuasive writing, where author is persuading and convincing you on something he wants you to do and/or believe.

Answer 5

I think Descriptive Writing

Answer 6

Descriptive paragraphs are usually developed using spatial order.
So now you must choose one out of the four topics listed.

Answer 7

Ooooo lala i choose 3. The Room
Do i have to vividly explain it? or can it be mystery

Answer 8

I do not know. It doesn't seem to say anything about that. All it says is that the paragraphs need to be unified and coherent.

Answer 9

Ugh what do i suppose to do than :3

Answer 10

@KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014

Answer 11

Now your write your paragraphs. As your writing them, keep in mind to answer the questions that were stated.

The questions are:
1. Do all of the sentences in this paragraph belong here? (unity)
2. Are all of the sentences in this paragraph in the right place? (coherence--method of development)
3. Are all of the sentences in this paragraph smoothly connected together into a whole paragraph? (coherence--use of transitional devices)

Answer 12

Uhh lol what do i do with my topic thought? Do i have to explain it or what

Answer 13

Is this really a question?

Answer 14

Yes it is.

Answer 15

Are you done with it?

Answer 16

No Mr. Not fully.
You want to help?

Answer 17

I'll pass

Answer 18

:)

Answer 19

I really dont know what your supposed to write for the topic you choose or the other topics. Is there anymore information that was listed or that your teacher explained?

Answer 20

Only because i'm on a 60 question test

Answer 21

^ Then you should be doing the test instead of being on OpenStudy :P

Answer 22

I need help myself >.^!

Answer 23

Kendric Uhh no that's all i have :3

Answer 24

There really isn't much I can do now ;-; I have no idea what the topics are about. I would contact your teacher about this and have her explain what the topics are about.

Answer 25

She's offline :D

Answer 26

No i'm on >.>

Kendric Umm, I'll write a paragraph , describiing the room :3
my teacher send me this ughh, he said it will be helpful

Answer 27

That will be when you know what your writing about. You need to find out what "The Room" is referring to.

Answer 28

Uhhh kendric sorry btu can u give me an example so i'd be clear on that :3

Answer 29

What do you mean by example?

Answer 30

Uhh for instance, My room is giant. o.m.g i dont' even know ;~;

Answer 31

Hmm I doubt that its telling you to write about your own room. ;-; I am seriously stuck on this. @Photon336 @rebeccaxhawaii @sweetburger @UsukiDoll What are your thoughts on this?

Answer 32

Kendric i'm stuck too

Answer 33

>.> what a smart thought

Answer 34

@KendrickLamar2014 I'll jsut descrive my room


@rebeccaxhawaii Stop, i'm not in the mood to laugh.

Answer 35

Og u don't look like rebecca right now >.>

Answer 36

Ughh I guess thats what you will have to write about. Im out of ideas and very confused about what it means. Sorry :(

Answer 37

Lol same, lool kendric we both got in to the web.. sorry for distracting u.. i'll jsut write what i think, lol and say i didn't understand it clearly :3

Answer 38

I jsut need one thing from u

Answer 39

Whats that?

Answer 40

Wish me Luck

Answer 41

Good luck! I wish you the best ^_^

Answer 42

The room is pretty general. Its probably left general so that you can make it about any room.

Answer 43

Do i have to describe the room?

Answer 44

Oh so basically, i'll comparison/contrast it, with my parents room. and than desctibe it... @KendrickLamar2014 @KendrickLamar2014

Answer 45

@KendrickLamar2014 whoops i meant to tagg u once :X

Answer 46

@KendrickLamar2014 I'm done with it.. here what i wrote:
Comparison/contrast:
3. The Room.
Something, is alike in one room which makes it merge in to a single dot.
The room is dark. The curtains are closed. Some of the light is shining through the brown curtains. By the wall stands the nightstand. It has clock on it. The color of the nightstand is light brown too. The room also has three beds; one is bunk bed, and a single bed on another side of the room. They both are brown. Although the bunk bed is giant, the single bed is much smaller.
Likewise two people sleep on each bed. But single bed has only one person to sleep on it.
The room has walls, it is also brown but I think it brownish-yellow.
Besides the wall and the windows that hold the room, there is also a closet. It holds clothes inside of it and the color it has is fulvous.
Therefore, we can see that the room has some things in common.

Answer 47

I don't know lol, my dad said i wrote it like a elementary student, thought i'm old enough :3

Answer 48

Okay, well there are a few things we can do to make it better. Ill guide you step-by-step :)

Answer 49

Lol, I send him on email right now.. Should I tell him that was a review?

Answer 50

1. "It has clock on it." This should be expressed differently. Its a very simple sentence.
2. "The color of the nightstand is light brown too." "The room has walls, it is also brown but I think it brownish-yellow." Try not to repeat so much like in these two sentences.
3. "But single bed has only one person to sleep on it." This should be expressed differently, maybe with a little bit more info or deleted.
4. "The room has walls, it is also brown but I think it brownish-yellow." Put a little more information on this sentence.
5. "It holds clothes inside of it and the color it has is fulvous." Should be expressed like this: It contains many colorful and unique clothes with many patterns"
6. "Therefore, we can see that the room has some things in common." Change the word "some" with "many", it makes more sense because of the many comparisons you explained.

Answer 51

Hrmm okay, i'll try to fix that, do u want to see my paragraph with corrections? :3

Answer 52

Of course :)

Answer 53

lolol @KendrickLamar2014 sorry, here how i got this ;3
Comparison/contrast:
3. The Room.
Something, is alike in one room which makes it merge in to a single dot.
The room is dark. The curtains are closed. Some of the light is shining through the brown curtains. By the wall stands the nightstand. It hold the mechanical clock.
The color of the nightstand is light brown too. The room also has three beds; one is bunk bed, and a single bed on another side of the room. They both are brown. Although the bunk bed is giant, the single bed is much smaller.
Likewise two people sleep on each bed. But single bed has only one person to sleep on it.
The room is light brown. Mostly it was painted out of brownish-yellow.
Besides the wall and the windows that hold the room, there is also a closet. : It contains many colorful and unique clothes with many patterns.
Therefore, we can see that the room has many things in common.

Answer 54

Very nice :)

Answer 55

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Answer 56

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Answer 57

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Answer 58

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Answer 59

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Answer 60

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Answer 61

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For moment it made me think that you .. xP