Question

Would truly appreciate some thoughts. ^.^
I write these kinds of poems rarely, but I find them enjoyable. Please, express your thoughts and be harsh if you'd like! :)

Answer 1

SPEAKING TO AN ABSTRACT


Hello little blossom over yonder
upon that tree.
Its been blue as of late,
wouldn't you care to share your mild
thoughts with me?
Sweet of so simple, there is a frail
gesture to your pink
For the air within has blown beauty
into a perfect wink.
Telling you, don't you hear those voices
telling you
that life is wonderful in its sunny
May dew?
I hear it short but sweet – like a melody
come true.
Ah, yes.
Smiling now, I do declare I am no
longer blue!

Answer 2

I thought it was great :)

Answer 3

Thank you :)

Answer 4

Very well written.

Answer 5

Thanks! @studio-games

Answer 6

Amazing! :D
I like how you cut off the sentences to the next part and made each rhyme c:
Atalwee slays again!
http://giphy.com/gifs/adele-3e4ogrhdt4msg

Answer 7

Thankchuu Alyswee! ^.^ Your so encouraging!

Answer 8

That is amazing atsie!!! <3

Answer 9

*^* Wunderbar Atsie <3

Answer 10

Looks Awesome your so smart and talented Keep up the great Work !!!!

Answer 11

Very poetic.. i think ya did really well on this... keep up the great work c;

Answer 12

I liked it a lot although to me its seemed to kind of ramble a bit but otherwise it was great!

Answer 13

Thank you guys! It means a lot! :)

Answer 14

atsie that was so good!! ^~^ keep writing these, i enjoyed reading it!

Answer 15

very nice, its short sweet, poetic, written well , your choice of words is very nice, for the style you went with :3

Answer 16

Insanely better than my song

Answer 17

Very nicely done. I like the interplay between color and mood.

Answer 18

Omg @Atsie No need to critique that was amazing! Very well done! :D

Answer 19

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Thank you!!!!
My whole day is made!! @Preetha
I'm not one to scream, but............right now I am.
Thank you, thank you!!!! ♥♥♥

Answer 20

It talks to the power of nature and its ability to affect our moods deeply.

Answer 21

And wow you got @Preetha to your post! That says alot to how good that was! Lol

Answer 22

@Preetha

Answer 23

Whoops, it posted by accident. XD
But, wow. You actually understand that @Preetha . That definitely was the thing I was aiming for when writing it.
Thank you so much for taking the time to look at it ^.^ ♥

Answer 24

@heyyyyitsholly
And thank you so much for your kind words as well.
Thank you everyone else @ILovePuppiesLol and @MysticFury and @tootzrll .
You guys all put a huge smile on my face today. :)))

Answer 25

me likey hehe :3

Answer 26

Aw, I'm so glad! @SamsungFanBoy

Answer 27

You are an amazing poet! You should write more often!

Answer 28

@reptibelle
I write every single day! :) I'm writing a 365 day poetic journey book right now actually. ^.^
Thanks for your kind words!

Answer 29

Ya, @Atsie It's a very well written poem. I also write poetry, and that was phenomenal! Words are very descriptive and definitely pulls in the reader. Wonderful piece of work! :D

Answer 30

@gottennis121
Thank you so so much! I appreciate it! ^.^

Answer 31

Great job on the poem, I might just have to look for it anytime I feel 'blue' as you put it.

Answer 32

Sooo @Atsie you said I can be harsh. You know what I think of it? Horribly *cough cough **amazing*


No kidding, it's too blue for me! I have a happy soul.

On top of that, I....I....I *can't think of something rude to say.* . IT'S AWESOME! *covers mouth*

Answer 33

@OpenStudy4life
I appreciate your form of rudeness. In fact its the first type of rudeness that I have ever liked. :P
Thank you so much though! I appreciate it! ^.^

Answer 34

@Atsie-- that is a beautiful poem. I wish I had such a poetic spirit. You should keep writing more of those poems. I would be happy to comment on them. ^_^ they're simply amazing! I love how you used such discriptive elements. Beautiful!

Answer 35

Wow! Thank you @Addy
Thats very kind of you to say so. I will keep working on such types as these most definitely! ^.^ <3<3