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Need help with conclusion. Any ideas.
Everyone has desires and most people have the ability to act on their desires. In the story “Where Are You, Where Have You Been” by Joyce Carol Oates and “Brokeback Mountain” by Annie Proulx, the authors introduce characters who have desires and are desired. In Brokeback mountain, two man who is in love each other, Jack and Ennis deny their homosexuality which they face against a homophobic community. In Where Are You, Where Have You Been, Connie the protagonist, who goes out and meets boys get into trouble with a stranger who threaten her life. In both

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any thoughts

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Well I am always bad when it comes to writing a conclusion. This is only my Introduction

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How should my conclusion start?

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Here is my thesis. I just notice that it got cut off.
. In both stories the authors use imagery and characterization to show that in both cases this fact leads them into situations that ultimately lead to their death.

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Love it great job

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You think so? I just need to write a conclusion and I'll be done with my essay.

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how does the story end I didn't catch that

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In where are you where have you been, the main character is kidnapped, rape and then killed.
In Brokeback mountain, Ennis loses his friend. ALso,this is a compare and contrast essay.

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Well that is a good conclusion

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that is not a conclusion..

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Why don't you just re-state your introduction?

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That the hard part. I suck at doing that.

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@freeG13

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"In the end Jack and Ennis" state the ending and then talk about what you think about it
Venomblast

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@Venomblast