Could anyone help revise my conclusion please

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ishipdestiel · Answer

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josedavid · Answer

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cloverloveee16 · Answer

Do you have any ides about how you want to write it?

ishipdestiel · Answer

Well I basically want to sum up what was written. My teacher said that she doesn't want me to use rhetorical questions.

cloverloveee16 · Answer

Oh ok. Well let me read it.

cloverloveee16 · Answer

Well, in the conclusion I would talk about how they were the same & different. But, when I say talk I don't mean a whole paragraph. Just revise how you talked about the similarities & differences in the essay. You could also talk about how you felt about both of the stories. Talk about the different Author's. These are just options. Choose all if you want. I hope this helps!

ishipdestiel · Answer

Awesome! Thank you

cloverloveee16 · Answer

Your Welcome. If you need anything else, Just message me !

ishipdestiel · Answer

I was wondering if this is okay 

In the end they both have some of the same quality, but they also have other qualities that make them unique. Muir has his story telling and Wordsworth has the use of personification. The authors had interesting views of nature, and very strong feelings of a particular flower they encountered. These flower were important that they decided to share their pleasure with others and became world known, even being taught in virtual schools.