Could someone please check my paper for punctuation, wording, or mistakes I may have made please and to see if I'm following the list below too?
thesis,
topic sentence,
concrete details,
transitions,
lead-ins,
commentary,
conventions,
and depth of analysis.
In my essay please it's super important

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Could someone please check my  paper for punctuation, wording, or mistakes I may have made please and to see if I'm following the list below too? 
thesis, 
topic sentence,
 concrete details, 
transitions, 
lead-ins, 
commentary, 
conventions,
 and depth of analysis.
In my essay please it's super important

scarlettfarra2000 · Answer

attachment

aveline · Answer

I'll post a link with corrections.

aveline · Answer

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fMXkqul5KZbyXS85v9LTqDBM9Ps1mpfhgNHjHawLr9M/edit?usp=sharing

scarlettfarra2000 · Answer

Thank you @Aveline