Just something else I wrote thoughts (Incomplete)

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atrineas · Answer

Fallen Angels, 
The clock ticks but time stands still,
He sits on the roof by her side talking,
The lights were all out but the single light coming from the lamp post,
They talked and talked but never got bored of each other,
When there was nothing to say he sat there just holding her tight,
To ensure her he wasn’t going to leave,
The horizon had begun to glow,
He sat there with her sleeping in his lap, 
Still holding her tight their hands locked,

 By Atrineas

southernbelle00 · Answer

i like it, kinda eerie but really intriguing! keep up the good work, please post when you finish it

rainbowdashrocks · Answer

i love it its amazing

nightcorenikki · Answer

It is really good, and an amazing concept. Though I have to ask if this is a poem or a short story...?

addy · Answer

This is cool! Keep up the good work!

atsie · Answer

This is very beautiful. It makes one wish for something they can't have in some kind of weird way. It makes someone want to congratulate the characters in the (poem or story) for keeping together and never letting go.
Basically, it does things to my emotions. :)
Wonderfully written @Atrineas  ^.^