Tell me what you think on what I wrote if you'd like

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aaliyahfairgood · Answer

Check this out

I'm the type usually remain silent
When I open up
words so violent like knives
And I tend to reach for the top
Success is the game I love to play a lot

I'm not a player but I'll ball on you
Watch out in the night
It going hard out here
Rep the game
Throw it up
Watch me flip it up again
My rein never ends

That's only because I got my own plans in life
But y'all gotta act like pellet going gnar
Welcome to my fist fight
No hope for you
I speak the truth
No telling lies
Middle of July
Id get so high
I could touch the sky
Only for you bae
I'd ride or die

kappahime · Answer

Wow! I loved it!  : D That was a amazing poem!!!

nightcrawlers_ · Answer

Well, you do have a lot of potential~~!!
But as I was reading it felt as though you were piecing different ideas and thoughts. I didn't get where you were going with this.

addy · Answer

It's a very nice poem. ^_^