Question

Redemption

(intro)
Dear heavenly father
Thy put me here for a reason
But what was it
Thy gave me sight
But what am I seeing

(Verse)
Why god why is it that I cry
Every time I look up at the sky
Praying and asking for your aid
Why god why do I feel so betrayed

Down on my knees should i steer
To whoever i can hear
Why god why is it that i try
If i will just struggle and die

With all the anger and all hate
Why god why would you even create
Why can’t we just love one another?
Like as if we were sister and brother

Why god why do people have all these lies
Why can’t there be beauty in us like fireflies
i just wanna be a father but
Why god why bother

(Chores)
oh god why must you do this to me
why god why must you be cruel
why can't you see....i'm not a tool

(Closing)
(F Word) and erase it all
Let mankind be their own down fall

Answer 1

2 thumbs up for you

Answer 2

its not even done let alone started XD @Alexandria_gracie_carson3

Answer 3

XD

Answer 4

i like it

Answer 5

that was lit

Answer 6

looks like a psalm from david lol

Answer 7

A to the men!
Its like you took the laments right out of my mouth that I have somedays!

Answer 8

haha ight XD

Answer 9

this is amazing XD very deep but not to deep lol

Answer 10

have you heard the poem Footprints?

Answer 11

yea I am still working on it and no

Answer 12

@ABM_David

Answer 13

Deer = Dear

Answer 14

This sounds like something I've read before. Don't be plagiarizing. You can get in trouble for that.

Answer 15

maybe cause i posted it awhile back and every time i change it up i repost it this is not plagiarized i came up with this on my own @aulyanchuk

Answer 16

@krissavannah

Answer 17

sweet lol

Answer 18

yep im trying to fix it up here and there but its mostly done

Answer 19

coolio

Answer 20

cool

Answer 21

right?:(

Answer 22

what? @aulyanchuk

Answer 23

nothin