Question

I am working on a "Self-introduction Speech/ Paper", could someone read over it and assist me in fixing it.. Thank you

Answer 1

http://homepage.smc.edu/mcnamara_catherine/selfintro.htm

Answer 2

Topic-
My dream career

1. How or what influenced my decision on this career
A. my love for animals especially dogs my entire life
B. Veterinary Assistant Program at my high school that I was in for 4 years

2. My reasons for choosing to go with all-natural
A. better for the animals health
B. less expensive in the long run


3. My reasons for choosing to have everything in one location
A. easier for pet owners or animal companions to find everything they need or could want in one location. (convenient for customers)
B. more sales and money for my business

Answer 3

I have come here before all of you today to tell you a little about myself. is good .

by the idea is good.

Answer 4

It all sounds perfectly good to me.

Answer 5

Okay. Thank you.. Is the thesis statement good?

Answer 6

Any ideas on what I can cut out or make shorter? I have to read this in 2.5 to 3 minutes. My grade will be affected if I go over or under by 30 seconds.

Answer 7

Throughout my entire life, I have been in love with animals, especially house pets such as dogs. I was intrigued with the idea (by the idea) of helping sick and injured animals.

with or by?

Answer 8

by the idea.

Answer 9

read your essay out loud, and time yourself.

Answer 10

Thank you.