Can someone help me write a thesis for an essay?

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meertma · Answer

i can help! whats the topic?

arabpride · Answer

Sure, this self-proclaimed writing critic doesn't mind :D

mandywestside · Answer

We would be glad to help!

harrietp · Answer

Sure! My teacher taught me a basic definition of a thesis statement which is consisted of 3 things: claim, arguement and action.

harrietp · Answer

For example, the claim would be : Candy is bad. The arguement would be :because it is unhealthy. and the action would be: therefore you should not eat too much of it.

harrietp · Answer

Thats just a basic example of a thesis which you can used and build on...

mandywestside · Answer

You an write that as: Candy is bad, because it is unhealthy, which is why you shouldn't eat too much of it.

kingme · Answer

Thanks everyone, hopefully some of you are online?

arabpride · Answer

3 hours later... yup cx

mandywestside · Answer

I'm online, I hope it's not too late.