Question

does this sound good please help will medal and fan!

Answer 1

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games are good; no matter what you say there fun, some are easier then others, they can make you relax, you can let out your stress ect. but the mane reason is to have fun meet people and get away from life; ill tell you how it gets you friends have fun and get away. lets say its a hard day at work your coffee was spicy, the person who got you your coffee spilled yours on a stack of paper work and that's how you got the spicy coffee as it was the extra one, and last but not least a bird pooped on you cause why not. you get cleaned up, you go out to the parking lot. you get in your car and realize one of your tires are flat. so you take the bus. you have to wait a hour be for it comes to your work street. you get on the bus and there's one seat open and its next to some one with a cold, you sit down next to them and they sneeze in your hand you open up your brief case and find the bottle of hand soup you open it and try to squeeze a drop out of it but nothing comes out. the bus stops you get off and you walk the rest of the way home. its 9:00 PM and you get inside your home and plop on the couch as its the closest piece of furniture to the door. You grab the remote and turn on your TV nothing good is on at that time of night, so you look around the room and just then it hits you, you have a Xbox, PSP, PC, and a play station 4 but its at the shop with the PSP. you jump up turn your PC on and you get on team speak or what ever you have order a pizza and get on a game relax, talk to your friends, get to lvl 50 on what ever game your on you make a new friend that lives in your area you defeat that boss and feel like your in your happy place. games are amazing they can help you by making you feel like you accomplished some thing so great, or when you have to take care of your pet in game or what ever the case might be you can do literally any thing inside of a game and that's why games are important, not stupid, not bad, and for sure not some thing you want to forbid or never try.

Answer 2

Hold on, I'm reading it.

Answer 3

Honestly, it seems somewhat rushed. Also, before you would turn this in, you would need to fix the capitalisation of the words, and a few spelling and grammar errors.

Answer 4

@Yinshy

Answer 5

thank you yeah i did this in like 10 min soooo yeah

Answer 6

it was due 2 weeks ago and yeah

Answer 7

but if i fix the caps and the grammar errors does it look good?

Answer 8

As far as I can tell, fixing those should be good.

Answer 9

thank you alot

Answer 10

Np =P

Answer 11

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