Question

Who's good at Language Arts? :)

Answer 1

me kind of

Answer 2

I am.

Answer 3

What is the Question i am kinda good

Answer 4

ok ! well i need help with an assignment

Answer 5

alright, go for it.

Answer 6

ok! sorry i had to get the assignment.. @ChrisHogan

Answer 7

Aight.

Answer 8

ok this is the assignment... @chrishogan

You will create a multimedia presentation of a book review for the novel or short story you read for Module 5.

View the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. This is your guide to a super submission.

Your book review presentation must include:

Computerized visuals or digital photos of handmade visuals
An audio of you reading your review
Write a book review. Be sure to include all the components of an effective review from the lesson:
Introduction
Body paragraphs that include an explanation of an interesting character, an interesting event, the tone, and the theme of the story
Conclusion

Visuals: Create visuals by computer or by hand for your book review. You may also choose ready-made images from the web. Please include:
Title and author of book
Image of the settings
Image of the characters
Image of your choice

Audio: You will record your audio or verbally present your review to an adult. Focus on these five audio features:
Preparation: Your presentation should be rehearsed so it flows smoothly.
Volume: Your voice should be loud enough to be easily heard.
Clarity: Your words should be clearly pronounced and easily understood.
Variety: Your speaking voice should be varied and entertaining.
Pace: The speed of your presentation should not feel sluggish or rushed.

Answer 9

So what exactly are you struggling with?

Answer 10

i started this assignment and my teacher graded but i didnt do very well.. but i will give you what i did and what you have to fix..
this is what i did :

The Strangers that Came to Town by Ambrose Flack is a great read for the group of people learning about how morals are made. The characters have depth and are easy to relate to. Andy is the main character, the protagonist, and is very interesting. Some of the events in the short story are funny; others make you think about how and why things like that happened. The story is from the point of view of 17 year-old Andy. He doesn’t mind pulling pranks and being mischievous, he has a normal sized family. His tone, and the story’s, is one of being very curious but near the end, one of learning. The theme is to not judge people before you get to know them. Andy and his family certainly tried, and at the end, they were rewarded for being so kind. The Strangers That Came to Town is a good read. In it the world of American-boy Andy is shown and how the community of his responds to newcomers. It does portray things in a new, interesting way. The gift at the end is quite a surprise..!

This is what my teacher said about it :

This is a wonderful start to your work for this assessment! You have a good start to your book review for the story, "The Strangers that Came to Town"! Make sure you have addressed each element, and then complete the other two parts of the assignment and submit all three together!
Listed below are the points you have earned in each section so far. If you have earned less than the points available in a section, work some more on that section to improve your total score:
Presentation Content
18/25: Intro/Description
15/20: Body/Analysis
7/10: Conclusion/Evaluation
Multi-Media Presentation
/25: Audio
Multi-Media Presentation
/20: Visual

Answer 11

so i need you to do the audio and visual part of the assignment because thats what i didnt do...

Answer 12

@ChrisHogan

Answer 13

Well I can't do the assignment for you but I can help you with what needs to be finished.

Answer 14

ok.. :)

Answer 15

You need a stronger intro. You need something that will capture someone's eye and make them pulled into reading your review.

Answer 16

You need something better than, Blah Blah is a great book to read.

Answer 17

ok!

Answer 18

can you help me write .. because im not great at writing :( i really need your help

Answer 19

Alright, give me just a brief description of the main character, their name, looks, and how they act. Also what is the main climax of the book? And yes, I'll help you write it.

Answer 20

Also, a good tip for writing, don't repeat yourself.

Answer 21

ok thanks your the best!

Andy is the main character. He is very observative and he likes pranks and jokes because of where he poisoned the Duvitche's mess of fish. He is capable of being sorry and he is very obedient to his parents.

Answer 22

@ChrisHogan

Answer 23

The theme of the book in your words were, don't judge someone before you get to know them, or something along the lines of that.

Answer 24

Make that not only your theme, but your intro.

Answer 25

right :)

Answer 26

You get what I mean? Intros can be tough, so can analysis.

Answer 27

yes i get you.. :)

Answer 28

Aight, you didn't do so well on your analysis. I noticed you kinda jumped around while doing the body paragraphs. You need to make sure to go from topic to topic so your sentences flow together and are adjacently correct.

Answer 29

ok

Answer 30

So here's an example. Andy is very adventurous, sometimes not for the best. He can sometimes get himself into a wild predicament. And continue that a bit. Then move on to him and his family.

Answer 31

Just make sure you section things off

Answer 32

You wouldn't want someone to make a sandwich for you and just cram stuff between to pieces of bread.

Answer 33

ok but can you help me write the rest please.. ?

Answer 34

Do you mean the analysis and intro?

Answer 35

well isnt that the part that you said wasnt that good.. my teacher graded it a 18/25

Answer 36

Yeah that's a 72 just in terms of x/100

Answer 37

yea...

Answer 38

I'm just considering writing it and sending you the entire thing. But I'll need time to do that.

Answer 39

how long? i can give you some time.. :)

Answer 40

Hmm, I'd say somewhere between 1-3 hours.

Answer 41

Depending on how good you want it.

Answer 42

i need this assignment done in 1 hour.. i think you can do it by then!

Answer 43

and i mean i want it as best as it can be! lol :)

Answer 44

Hmm. I'll try.

Answer 45

ok!!!

Answer 46

but can you stay in the post please.. dont leave :)

Answer 47

I will.

Answer 48

thanks! and do you want me to give you what needs to be in the assignment again.. :)

Answer 49

Nah, I think i've got it.

Answer 50

ok! but remember i also need the visual and audio part of the assignment . theres 3 parts..
Intro/Description
Body/Analysis
Conclusion/Evaluation
Multi-Media Presentation
Audio
Multi-Media Presentation
Visual

Answer 51

You do the video/audio

Answer 52

i dont know what to do for that part though...
well whatever we can figure that after you do the assignment..

Answer 53

alright!! so are you doing the assignment? wait dont you need to read the story that i read to do it and understand it more? its not that long i think you should read it :)

Answer 54

@ChrisHogan you there? :)

Answer 55

The Strangers that Came to Town is a short story and considered one of the best works of Ambrose Flack. Central in the story corresponds to the struggle felt by an immigrant family in Croatia as they try to adjust to the American way of life. Andy, a rather curious and kindly 17-year-old boy, is the protagonist. He proves that being curious can be rather dangerous and somewhat misleading. Andy’s traits however, would remain to be significant as acceptance is gained by the Duvitch family

Answer 56

dang! that was fast!

Answer 57

are you done?

Answer 58

Thats all i could do.

Answer 59

ok ... i can give you more time :)

Answer 60

Well i'm actually gonna need to go..

Answer 61

aw ok :(

Answer 62

but wait!

Answer 63

I tried the best i could with how much time i had

Answer 64

tell me what you did? what you gave me is what ? the intro only?

Answer 65

mhm.

Answer 66

and the analysis?

Answer 67

this guy cheated.he stole this from a site.i checked it with a plagirism checker.

Answer 68

oh really!

Answer 69

yes vollyballlover

Answer 70

:( i was gonna use it! thanks for letting me know! whoo! that was close :/

Answer 71

i will help you.dont make any more post

Answer 72

ok but come back to our new post

Answer 73

ok

Answer 74

wow,@ChrisHogan please dont copy in the future