My new one kekek
ESSAY: PARAGRAPH TYPES 1. In a short expository paragraph (4-8 sentences), introduce and discuss three questionable persuasive tactics that authors use in making arguments. If you need to review the information on persuasive tactics, see the lesson “Analyzing an Author's Credentials/Argument.” Make sure that your paragraph has a clear topic sentence and a concluding sentence. Use correct grammar and punctuation. 2. Write a short narrative paragraph about the day your mother made your bed with you still in it. Remember that you are telling a story. Use correct grammar and punctuation. 3. Write a short paragraph in which you describe what your room looked like after it mysteriously cleaned itself up. Pay attention to using words that help the reader "see" the room. Unify the description around a single theme or impression you wish to create for the reader. Use correct grammar and punctuation.
@Elsa213 here ya go now read them and correct it for me ;]
For the first one i didn't have anythgin in my brain so basicaly i worte what was in my mind at that moment. The second one was actually an odd thing they would ask to write out, so i wrote a story lol, since they say it shoudl be narrative lel the third one is based on real life._.
1. Why is it necessary to wash your hands? A lot of germs enter human body, this germs lead to many disease. They're also called bacteria. So most of this bacteria enters our organism, when we don't follow health rules. So, the very first rule is to wash your hands. In whatever place you're in or whatever you're doing always wash your hands. As we know not all the people are used to washing hands. When they come home, or even after visiting place, they don't wash hands. This people are ill, since when they come home, they get food, put it in the mouth, and let germs with groups enter your body. Now then, to avoid illness and bacteria in your body, it is necessary to keep your body unadulterated. And it’s really simple, wash your hands after everything you do. Because there is always that one bacteria who would enter your body and harm it. 2. My mother taught me to make my bed. But I never, accustomed to make my bed. Therefore I couldn’t get used to it. When my mother came into my room she would say: “And again same old story, your bed is not made. If you don’t learn to make the bed, then you’ll have a hard time being neat. This would continue until, one event. We had guest to come over, through the day we had fun. But when it was evening, and time to bed my parents said that guest will sleep on my bed. Well, I didn’t have problem with that, but when the guest came in to my room, they rejected to sleep on my bed. They said they’d like to sleep on the floor. Because my bed was a mess, it had some crumpled papers on it, and the blanket was dirty. I felt ashamed to see and hear all this. Instantly I remembered my mom’s words: “If you don’t learn to make your bed, you won’t have that opportunity to be a neat person.” From that day, I always made my bed, and more I began to listen to my mother instructions she gave. 3. Truly, I never had time to clean my room, and honestly I tell myself I didn’t like to do that job. I didn’t care if my bed was made, not did I care if my furniture had dust on it. I was never interested, if the rugs where on the right place, or if the curtains were dirty, nor if insects wandered all around my room. I was that kind of person. But with a time I started to notice a change. Once I left my room dirty, and when I returned it was cleaned! With a time I actually started to like that. Once I tried to pick in and see who does that work, since I started to like seeing my room cleaned, which made me do less mess. Well anyways, I figured out the person who actually cleaned my room! It was my oldest sister who would sneak in after I leave and start cleaning. With this good work, she awakened the feelings in me to keep my room neat.
i believe that's all what they where askign me (;
" As we know not all the people are used to washing hands. When they come home, or even after visiting place, they don't wash hands." As we all know, most people aren't used to washing their hands. When they come home, even after visiting places, they do not wash their hands.
Oh yeaa that sounds better. Anythin else?
i'm too lazy to read the rest.... so naww
Kay
metal meh ;o
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what is this ? A lot of germs enter human body, this germs lead to many disease. They're also called bacteria. So most of this bacteria enters our organism, when we don't follow health rules
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