"Alone"
“Alone” Trash full of crumbled songs, Where did I go wrong… I want you back, I want you back, When the world chained me down,you was all I had… Knees falling on the ground, Can u hear the cries….the screaming sound, Trying not to drown in my own tears, Just woke up from another nightmare of falling down endless stairs, You love me,yet u never cared, All around me eyes stared,shakely holding my knees feeling so scared, Why not just kill me,you won’t care,my life is not to spear, Not afraid of death,never came prepared… Dark ends of my heart,is this where it ends, Forgive me for my sins,when I do it again, My friends don’t understand,they don’t know that lonely feeling… You always been loved,but yet you don’t know the true meaning,.. Ohhh That taste in ur mouth when you u feel unnoticed or replaced, But I’m holding tight to the good memories, without a single thought of them erased, when I’m blind following ur way, but then you disappeared without a track to trace, people trying to steal ur heart, feeling chased away,and you end up in a relationship that’s burned down in flames, just not meant to be,but when you love them so much,you just can’t see…them the same, but I, can’t, take this pain, no more, i just can’t live on this way,I just can’t move on like this again….. blood drippin down to my elbow, I’m holding this blood stained knife, right shoulder telling me this,left shoulder telling me no, now walking in the rain,with no warm place to go… but just know, I love you, And I’ll live each day as though, As if you never know… Ohhh…. As if you never know… How much I, Love you…. Only if you felt the same… I loved you so much,willing to make all these sacrifices, Everyday I’m drifting farther away from you without license, I miss it when me and you would stare at the horizon, When I was you I felt like I was rising,but when u left me I bang my fists on the ground till they bleed, Ending up smiling just to keep from crying, I’m young but everyday I feel like I’m dying… I treasured you,my beautiful diamond, You never responded to my I love you text,cus you never did…why am I trying, I never want to drown,now I’m diving, now I’m being real,not really rhyming… blood drippin down to my elbow, I’m holding this blood stained knife, right shoulder telling me this,left shoulder telling me no, now walking in the rain,with no warm place to go… but just know, I love you, And I’ll live each day as though, As if you never know… Ohhh…. As if you never know… How much I, Love you…. Only if you felt the same… Ooooh…. *soft slow voice* Was it so hard for you to show me affection,you was my future you was my gps map that lead the direction, You all I had… You all I had…. I love you.
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Beautiful song neko
love it <3 <3 <3
what a horrible song
@batmano3 this is the WORST song ive ever seen
Stop being mean as always @Mr_Perfection_xD
my honesty hurts
Wow @NekoMatt Good Job on your song :) But tip, on your punctuation you want to work on it more, because I understand the effect you are giving the song but you want to stick with commas more, the suspension points :) but besides that good song, good way of words and good way of staying true to the theme of the song <3 i love it!
Amazing!!!
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