fan and medal please help me please and i know this is not math but no one would help me in english

Read the following claim and counterclaim from a student’s argument essay:

We need to spend more time in nature. We have work and other obligations which require us to be indoors.

Which revision effectively uses a transitional thought to show the relationship between the claim and counterclaim?

We need to spend more time in nature; furthermore, we have work and other obligations that require us to be indoors.
Despite our commitments to work and other obligations that require us to be indoors, we need to spend

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fan and medal please help me please  and i know this is not math but no one would help me in english

Read the following claim and counterclaim from a student’s argument essay:

We need to spend more time in nature. We have work and other obligations which require us to be indoors.

Which revision effectively uses a transitional thought to show the relationship between the claim and counterclaim?

We need to spend more time in nature; furthermore, we have work and other obligations that require us to be indoors.
 Despite our commitments to work and other obligations that require us to be indoors, we need to spend

aleah54 · Answer

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cheez · Answer

I would say the bottom " Despite our commitments to work and other obligations that require us to be indoors, we need to spend..." I am very good with claims and counterclaims.

aleah54 · Answer

could you help me with 2 more @cheez

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@Cheez

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please @Cheez