Question

Would someone or a few people look over my speech draft and assist in removing some of it? The topic is on "Most effective stress relief techniques/practices"

Answer 1

Its only the main body parts. Its a 5-6 minute speech. Right now its a little over 7. Thank you

Answer 2

@hyperlunatic

Answer 3

I'm over 7 minutes. The time requirement is 5-6 minute.

Answer 4

nice story

Answer 5

does it have to be in 5-6 time?

Answer 6

Thanks, but its not a story. Its an informative speech. Yes thats the requirements. If I go over or under I lose 20 points.

Answer 7

well
imma call it a story.

Answer 8

what if you was to read a little faster?

Answer 9

Since I have to memorize it thats not really possible.

Answer 10

i dont know about what your feelings about this, but you could possibly take out
(4 ways to wipe away stress: effective muscle relaxation, breathing exercises and guided imagery can help you find relief from unhealthy stress).

Answer 11

or shorten that

Answer 12

I wont be saying that when I do the speech. Thats just there so its cited correctly.

Answer 13

ahh

Answer 14

And thats only worth 8 seconds so that wont make much of a difference.

Answer 15

it would in the long run

Answer 16

I hate that it has a time requirement. My speech is perfect how it is now.

Answer 17

its nice, but you have to memorize i

Answer 18

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Answer 19

i dont see anything to take out from what i saw.
i can only say good luck and try to summarize it as you go if possible

Answer 20

Alright. Thanks for trying. Does the introduction and conclusion look good?

Answer 21

Looks Great

Answer 22

I take it you are in college?

Answer 23

Yes.