Question

help!

Answer 1

@smartnerd1111

Answer 2

hi

Answer 3

hey... well i need help with the argument orgainzer..

Answer 4

do you remember when we did the claim, counterclaim, and reasons?

Answer 5

yeah

Answer 6

ok well i need help with one part..

Answer 7

i need the evidence/support for reason 1.. because i had to fix it...

Answer 8

Reason 1:Allowing teenagers to play dangerous sports can teach them how to encounter physical risks that they would not be prepared for in the future.

Evidence: Teens need the physical risk during teen development, as a mean to educate children how to handle physical threats they may encounter later in life. A teen lacking physical risk could result in an inability to properly assess future physical risks. Along with this problem, the same teen will likely have difficulty finding the physical courage. Having said this, the physical risks that I am referring to are those within sports and they go beyond what is necessary to achieve the reason above.

Answer 9

@smartnerd1111 yea im here..

Answer 10

no but thats not reason 1.. i had to change it... this is reason 1..

Teens need the physical risk during teen development, as a mean to educate children how to handle physical threats they may encounter later in life. A teen locking physical risk could result in inability to properly assess future physical risks. Along with this problem, the same teen will likely have difficulty finding the physical courage. Having said this, the physical risks that i am referring to are those within sports and they go beyond what is necessary to achieve the reason above.

Answer 11

this is the same thing as the above one and you spelled lacking wrong

Answer 12

hello?

Answer 13

yea but instead of that being the evidence/support .. its reason1 .. so now i need a new evidence /support for that reason.. do you understand?

Answer 14

?? @smartnerd1111

Answer 15

is this a good evidence/support for that reason?

A teen needs to have something proper to brag about that gathers his/her friends around, allows for fun times, and the general support of each other. Besides building up physical resilience, dangerous sports builds strength in the teen's self and also the teen's friends as they all can help the self esteem and development of each other.

Answer 16

a reason cant be that long though

Answer 17

reason 1 could be teens needing physical risk for devolpment

Answer 18

then can you like use that same idea of that reason and just make it shorter? :)

Answer 19

what?

Answer 20

can you take the reason 1 and make it shorter?

Answer 21

but still keep the idea of it?

Answer 22

yes i made it shorter teens need physical risk for devolpment

Answer 23

ok.. thx