Some states have regulations about feeding wild animals, feeding deer for example, and these restrictions are to keep people healthy because sometimes certain diseases are transmitted from animals to humans indirectly.
Which of the following revisions best improves the language in this passage while leaving the original meaning intact?
A. Some states have regulations about feeding wild animals, such as deer. These restrictions are to keep people healthy because sometimes diseases are indirectly transmitted from animals to humans.
B. Feeding wild animals, such as deer and other animals

Question

Some states have regulations about feeding wild animals, feeding deer for example, and these restrictions are to keep people healthy because sometimes certain diseases are transmitted from animals to humans indirectly.
Which of the following revisions best improves the language in this passage while leaving the original meaning intact?
 		A.	Some states have regulations about feeding wild animals, such as deer. These restrictions are to keep people healthy because sometimes diseases are indirectly transmitted from animals to humans.
 		B.	Feeding wild animals, such as deer and other animals