Question

My new song (short) Called Lonesome Hard War

Answer 1

You where my captain I was your queen, You said you would never ever leave and then the next day you said were done and like just that I got depressed cause I “was” your queen you trapped me-e pulling the bark right off my tree screaming your name but your no where to be seen now I started a crying scene I feel wondering if you’ll come back to me, Now im hugging my knee’s saying this is Lonesome Hard War harder than the breeze I guess your not so easy to please.And I started a crying scene saying……this….is….lonesome hard war! If you really loved me than why did you say I do, Is it just a prank I really loved you now you got me depressed dancing all alone with no one to hold im alone in the freezing cold I got no money you took it all now this is lonesome hard war……You were my captain I “was” your queen (Why did you leave me) it’s a lonesome hard war I need to step up climbing the stairs making me look desperate all alone im(breaking the ice) (climbing the tree) pulling the bark right off the tree its been soo long since I said hi to you tonight…….I never said I was leaving this was your idea no its so long I hope to see you tonight I was scared this would happen but now its all a dream I awake with you gone so long out of my life I didn’t want this to happen I was always scared of this so, So long and goodnight so long I hope you survive with all the money you took now im scared no one will come by…..(lonesome hard war) Come by come by Lonesome hard war come by so long goodbye I wake up now,Now I know now its all a nightmare so its Lonesome..Hard....War!

Answer 2

Very Pretty!You should become a song writer.

Answer 3

Very good

Answer 4

@meowimacat Sounds cool ain't it? (smiles)

Answer 5

@Hauntedwoodsgal I love it. I was listening to "On Melancholy Hill" by Gorillaz as I was reading this...I drew to tears....You reminded me of my sad past... ((Sigh)) I will write a song about it. (Takes out guitar and starts composing sadly)

Answer 6

Oh Thank you everyone!! :) this is about my horrible dream that I lost someone dearest to my heart

Answer 7

@drawwithapurpose