Question

Here is Another Song I am Composing (Slow Rock Version)

Answer 1

BITTER LOVE NOSTALGIA

Why?
It has been so long...
3 years without speaking.
Finally I have come to this...
I spoke to you a couple of days ago.
It was so great!
I loved the company.
It was a little awkward but, I still loved talking to you
But at my last reply
When I said "you were the best friend I could ever ask for"
You shut me up...
Now I feel so stupid for saying that...
Now I am in tears,
Laying on my bed faced down...
Tears on the pillowcase...
My mind wanders to a place
When we would be s-o clo-se....
When we so-o IN-VIN-CI-BLE!!!
(Tears drop down my cheek)

I guess I am still not over you yet...!!!

I dream of the days when we were so happy!
When we screwed the world and did the hella we want!!
You holding my hands...
Calling me "Sweetie" and smiled every time we meet!
Now, you wouldn't dare approach me and talk sweet...
If only I wasn't so stupid to hold my feelings in...
If only I could go back and tell you "I love you" from the start
Then, we wouldn't be so far apart...
Maybe 'til then I wouldn't feel so nostalgic...
Maybe then I wouldn't see you change so much
Maybe 'til then I would still have...YOU.

Whatever happened to us?
Was it really all my fault that I made you change so much?
I blame my ******* big mouth for speaking before thinking...
Why did I ever say "sweetie" was a grandma phrase?
S***, I wish I could go back and shut the rude me!
I blame myself for making you change so much.
Now I am wishing on stars,
Hoping to go back in time to see the old you,
Never changing a single thing about you,
And fuss up my pride,
and confess my love for you...
'Til then, I would hold you in my arms...
and kiss you passionately until time indefinite!!!
But until now, all I can do is dream!

I dream of the days when we were so happy!
When we screwed the world and did the hella we want!!
You holding my hands...
Calling me "Sweetie" and smiled every time we meet!
Now, you wouldn't dare approach me and talk sweet...
If only I wasn't so stupid to hold my feelings in...
If only I could go back and tell you "I love you" from the start...
Then, we wouldn't be so far apart...
Maybe 'til then I wouldn't feel so nostalgic...
Maybe then I wouldn't see you change so much
Maybe 'til then I would still have...YOU.

(Stops playing guitar and moves to piano instrument only)
Now, there is only an empty space...
Now, I can only be so nostalgic...
I can only wish on starts to go back in time...
Only in my dreams...
Only in my dreams, would I still have the old you...
Only in- my- dre-e-e-ams...(cries)
WERE YOU...
M-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-NE
(One tear drops on piano key)
(Ends song)
(blackout)

Answer 2

Hey, guys, Ash here, I composed this song with all my heart and yeah, based on a true story: I have had a rough patch in my life and these days have been rough for me as well.
The music video (the way I imagined it) is supposed to take place at a very dark mansion, it is all black and white. There are candles without flames and supposedly as the singer sings slowly the candles light up one by one and as the candles light up they create the illusion of the singer sitting on space surrounded by stars and as the tears drop on the piano key an illusion of slow motion appears while at the same time, the singer looks up and is gone (symbolizing death/ yeah, the singer dies for he feels death is the only way to be with his sweetie the way he wanted). And the video ends with him holding his love's hand as she smiles across the vast field.

Answer 3

So, yeah, I have been having a hard time coping...I really could use a friend right now, somebody with a listening ear. If anyone is sympathetic enough to comfort me, I could use it right now...just message me or whatever...and I will tell u all about it.

Answer 4

@A_Burning_Masquerade

Answer 5

@Hauntedwoodsgal @meowimacat

Answer 6

Extremely well written. I'm amazed on how well written this is. It's extremely tear jerking material and it's based on life events which makes it so much more interesting. I hope everything goes better in your life. If you need someone to talk to then just message me. I can talk most of the time.

Answer 7

@A_Burning_Masquerade Thanks I appreciate it :)

Answer 8

Amazing!!

Answer 9

The songs you write are absolutely mesmerizing. I love them. Great job :3

Answer 10

@meowimacat (looks at a distance and starts getting an idea) UR right!!! Maddie!! UR A GENIUS!!!! (kisses her forehead from excitement) THANKS!!! xD (runs off and starts working)

Answer 11

OMG WHAT DID I DO RIGHT?????????? XD