Poem
Just a sudden inspiration

Question

Poem
Just a sudden inspiration

salsabyl · Answer

Long black hair floating
Time is stopping
The sounds disappearing
She raised her eyes
Eagle pierced my heart
Dancing mirrors
Her and I from the whole world apart

And then she laughed
Like a glass shattering

nincompoop · Answer

great! now what?

atsie · Answer

This is very descriptive and fondles the imagination very nicely! Sounds almost like it was inspired by something of Indian perspective or rather of some kind of tribe in the deep depths of a neat jungle that doesn't have wingspanroaches and scorpians. (nice thing to wish for xD)
You should try to finish this though somehow and let others know what you are writing about. ^.^ @Salsabyl

atsie · Answer

Not wingspan...... wingspanroaches........as in the little annoying bugs. Like this... http://images.wisegeek.com/wingspanroach.jpg

atsie · Answer

It keeps doing it and messing the link up. xD I'll attach a pic then.

salsabyl · Answer

Wow, that's almost exactly the image I was picturing XD
Should I keep writing it?

atsie · Answer

Yes, I sincerely think you should! @Salsabyl You've got a style in you, just bring it out some more! Atta girl! ^.^

atsie · Answer

Or....uhm.....atta boy............seeing as I always embarrass myself around here all the time by mis-gendering people.

salsabyl · Answer

Hahahahaha thanks 
No u were right..guurl :)