New free form poem inspired by "white noise" by pvris
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I'm breathing can you hear me?
Across the room, you never see me like you saw me that night.
I'm screaming, but all that comes out is static.
Your eyes are closed to my suffering.

Question

New free form poem inspired by "white noise" by pvris
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I'm breathing can you hear me?
Across the room, you never see me like you saw me that night.
I'm screaming, but all that comes out is static.
Your eyes are closed to my suffering.

afloridagirl · Answer

amazing! it says so much, you are able to use very specific words that make the poem come to life

coookiethegreat123 · Answer

I love this style of writing i would totally read more!

hope210 · Answer

Pretty good