Help please! Compare and contrast your Sweet Sixteen experience with a Quinceañero birthday party. For example, you can use the information about el Quinceañero that Marisa wrote in her blog to her friend Mauricio. You can find more information el Quinceañero by clicking on the link at the bottom of page 3 of the lesson area. You can use your own Sweet Sixteen experience or, if you’ve not had one, a Sweet Sixteen of a friend or family member. You can use a Graphic Organizer to organize your ideas. After you complete the Graphic Organizer and organize your thoughts, you'll be prepared to wr
All it's asking you to do is find the differences between a 16th birthday in the US and the Quinceanero of Mexico. What do you need help with ? :)
I don't really know any differences... ;-;
Were you born and raised in the US?
Yes I've lived here my whole life
Okay, are you 16 yet? (Not trying to be a creeper, I promise)
No I turned 15 on Friday.
Okay, Happy Late Birthday! Anywho :) Can you name me some things that you've noticed are a trend for 16 birthdays in the US, how many people are invited, what type of party it is, what presents are given, things of that sort :)
I've never been to one and my brothers didn't celebrate so that's why I'm having trouble.
Well, think about the stereotypical 16th birthdays in movies, what's there?
Normally a stage with a huge crowd a gigantic cake, and fancy outfits
Good! :D |dw:1466611222022:dw| what about a car as a present to the birthday girl/guy?
Oh yea, I didn't think of that.
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@Jadeishere
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Ok, thank you so much for the help!
@Jadeishere Now I have to put it into this graphic organizer thingy lol [Paragraph 1] TOPIC SENTENCE: (This sentence should be about the similarities between the two events.) SUPPORTING EVIDENCE: (Explain first similarity in detail.) SUPPORTING EVIDENCE: (Explain second similarity in detail.) SUPPORTING EVIDENCE: (Explain third similarity in detail.) [Paragraph 2] TOPIC SENTENCE: (This sentence should be about the differences between the two events.) SUPPORTING EVIDENCE: (Explain first difference in detail.) SUPPORTING EVIDENCE: (Explain second difference in detail.) SUPPORTING EVIDENCE: (Explain third difference in detail.)
Okay, so let's work on the topic sentences, state 3 things that are similar between the two
Formal Dress, lots of people, and dance with father.
@Jadeishere
In a sweet 16 do you see girls dancing with their dads? Not so much, I think we're missing a huge one- They're typically both dealing with girls
Oh, umm big flowy princess dresses
@Jadeishere
Lol xD No, i mean the similarity we're missing is the Girl aspect, Sweet 16's are thought of as more of a feminine party, and the same with quinceaneras Now using the three; feminine celebrations, formal wear and a crowd of people, construct a sentence about the similarities
Ohhh ok!
Sweet 16's and Quinceanera's both celebrate a girl's sixteenth birthday with a crowd of people dressed formally.
quinceaneras are 15th birthdays
Oh so 15th-16th birthday.
There are many similarities between a 16th birthday in the US and the Quinceanera of the Hispanic culture, some of which include dressing formally, large amounts of people and most importantly, they are usually celebrated by teenage girls.
That could be a possibly topic sentence for that
Oh see I wouldn't have thought of that.
I write a lot, I have to for my classes xD
Oh well that makes sense.
Yeah, so you understand what to do?
Yes, so the other topic sentence will be what's not in common?
There are many differences between a 16th birthday in the US and the Quinceanera of the Hispanic culture, some of which include first time wearing makeup in public, getting a car as a present, and having different themes. How's this?
Well, don't copy the other one completely Say something like.. Um While there are similarities, the differences are vast, (state the differences)
Ok, well thank you for your help! I wouldn't have been able to get this done without you. :)
No problem! I love to help any time of the day :D Good luck!
Thanks!
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