Question

I hate rap but I also like being real when it comes down to writing music. This is a random song I wrote and yes it's rap. Critics have said: "Its not the normal kind of rap. This is like if you combine The Fresh Prince Will Smith and Ronnie Radke" said by my friend Ryan.

Answer 1

Destiny
written by David DeLong

Verse1:
My destiny was at its highest peak
Before I ever fought the people
Who didn't deserve the beating
That I laid upon them
I try to do my best to change who I am
But maybe my destiny is preventing me
From becoming who I was truly meant to be
I have fought with all my life
Running without regret
Maybe I should stay here and continue the fight like it was nothing

Never the time
To do it right
So why expect so much of me now

Chorus:
It's nice tonight
Laying on this bed
With no worry about
Any soul but my own
So here I go
With or without any of you
Standing by my side
Cause I know
What I must do
To protect my family
And move on and live with my destiny

Verse 2:
I have haters circling around the Internet
Calling me a troll, bully, or scum of the earth
But I can't stress nor will I worry
About what all my haters think
Cause at the end of the day I just got me to worry about
So stand there and stare at me
Even though I'm not the prettiest one here
You are just amazed at all that I have accomplished
And it won't stop till I can't breathe no more
I will stand here rapping real to you all
While all these annoying so called rappers
Talk about sex, drugs, and gangs
I'm not about that life
Nor will that life be about me

Stand next to me and here me say the words
"I make my own destiny"

Chorus:
It's nice tonight
Laying on this bed
With no worry about
Any soul but my own
So here I go
With or without any of you
Standing by my side
Cause I know
What I must do
To protect my family
And move on and live with my destiny


Hook:
My life has been a subject to nothing but tragedies
I had a family that took me in
But they pretend not to know me cause
of the family who already doesn't know me
I write these songs to be a voice for the ones who can't speak alone
Yet I get misunderstood more than I should
I have always been an outcast
Let me show you how to break free
Of that social shell
I know all to well about social circles
Cause I was never accepted
So look for me and scream the words
"This is my life, I control my destiny"

Chorus:
It's nice tonight
Laying on this bed
With no worry about
Any soul but my own
So here I go
With or without any of you
Standing by my side
Cause I know
What I must do
To protect my family
And move on and live with my destiny

Answer 2

This is very pretty! I love it!