Question

MEDAL
Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:

Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?

A longer phrase was converted to a single word.
A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.
Redundant phrases were eliminated.
Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.
I think is b

Answer 1

@sammixboo

Answer 2

It isn't B.

There are some repatitive words in the original phrase, such as 'father' and 'disliked'. Those two words were changed to 'he' and 'hated. This tells us the word father was changed to a different pronoun, while the word 'disliked' was changed to a word with a similar meaning, hated.

Answer 3

so its d? @sammixboo

Answer 4

Correct :)

Answer 5

yayyy