Question

I thought I'd attempt something a bit different.
Please please tell me your thoughts! ^o^

Answer 1

WAYS TO EVADE

Right between the cheekbones
you can be drowned out
by musical melodies.
Top by the crown of the head
you can be sealed away
most definitely.

Each side of the nose
you can be seen no more
by clasped eyelids.
At above the chin
your foolishness can be laughed at
by hurting ribs.

Fingerly gentle but firm
your touch can be brushed off
by uncertain hands.
Quietly the door rushes to shut
your words silent
like white colored crayons.

Answer 2

While this may take some guessing to figure out what applies to what, it basically eludes to shutting out someone who needs to be shut out with all the blocking techniques your mind and body is capable of. (I hope that makes sense! )

Answer 3

I like the poem @Atsie but it seems like your kind of talk about the human body. :)

Answer 4

Alright, let me define it down for ya'll so no further speculations can be assumed.

The first line talks about drowning out someone by musical melodies right between the cheekbones. What would that be? That would be headphones put into one's ears.

Top by the crown of the head talks about the brain. How the brain can think whatever it pleases about the person its shutting out.

Each side of the nose e.g clasped eyelids. Whats on each side of the nose? Eyes. Those eyes are shut so that way they cannot see the person they are attempting to shut out.

At above the chin. Whats above the chin? One's laugh, one's smile, etc......laughing at someone else's foolishness till one's own ribs may hurt.

Fingerly gentle but firm. This is known as pushing someone else's touch away such as a phony hug or hand squeeze e.g also another form of pushing them away and shutting them out.

And last but not least the door rushing to shut out what someone says because a hate comment, a foolish word, or a silly lie does not need to be heard. So the door shuts it silent till those very words are as white and blank as crayons.

I hope this clarifies it all. :)

Answer 5

Oh it totally makes so much sense now it made sense then but i was a little confused. ^_^ @Atsie

Answer 6

I understand :)

Answer 7

Very nice !

Answer 8

I really like this poem because I can completely relate with shutting people out and in the same way that you've described it. You're very talented! :)

Answer 9

I love it... To me the meaning is that you are trying to start a new chapter and that you have to think of how your blocking people from it.

Answer 10

Thank you all so much. I'm very happy it registered in some sense! @butlertechrules @umerlodhi @AllieKat01

Answer 11

@Atsie Me luvv <33

Answer 12

Thankchuuuuuuuuuu!!! ♥ @SamsungFanBoy

Answer 13

Chu welcommeeee ;3 <3

Answer 14

This is an amazing piece! I'd love to see more of your work!

Answer 15

Thank so much @marym2019 I actually have more things posted in the writing section that I can send you links to if you're interested! ^o^

Answer 16

Yes please!

Answer 17

Smokey Skies

http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/577bb653e4b08b4323cfa310


Mellow June

http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/576afc40e4b0144f08369605


In Honor Of

http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/575ee127e4b0008ef3e00975


That One Room

http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/57543da4e4b0c82eef135766


Speaking to An Abstract

http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/573b33dee4b0b2ad5a3aa727


And I have more, but I don't to be overwhelming. @marym2019 ^.^

Answer 18

Thank you so much!

Answer 19

You are so welcome ^.^

Answer 20

omg Atsie
I wantz your writing ability *^* <33333
My lovez dis poem <333333 ♥ ^.^

Answer 21

@YoungStudier Aweh, Emily thats so sweet of you. Thanks so much! ^o^

Answer 22

Chu're welcome <3333