Question

Is there any grammatical mistakes in this sentence. Using this as an excuse, Hutu gangs and the military waged a massive attack on Tutsi and moderate Hutu. That resulted in the deaths of 800,000 to 1,000,000 people.

Answer 1

Yes, there are some mistakes. The final sentence should not be a sentence in itself, but rather a continuation of the previous sentence.

Answer 2

So it should be Using this as an excuse, Hutu gangs and the military waged a massive assault Tutsi and moderated Hutu which resulted in in the deaths of 800,000 to 1,000,000 people.

Answer 3

@Colabineb

Answer 4

If your done please close this

Answer 5

The first sentence is too long.