Question

I have FINALLY shocked the whole world!

Answer 1

And wrote a poem that doesn't rhyme.

Answer 2

SENTIMENTALISM DISCUSSED

Gardens tune
to the cuticle and lash
permissive as gentle as
a tiger tamed
to be admired and touched
till the feeling
can be worn as threaded
braids of daisies
and ringed ringlets of lesson
little leaves
plainly saying that regret
is an abomination
to a wonderful world.

Answer 3

Me and my metaphors never seem to cease and in this case I chose a very simple way to discuss sentimentalism.
A garden is beauty in its own array and it feels and shines in the admiration of everyone looking.
Emotionally taking in an aspect that one is given, either found in outward tears or internal stirrings, these forms of sentimentalism shouldn't be regretted no matter in love or battle.
If society calls you a chicken for feeling, then be the best darn chicken there is.

Answer 4

I'm so shocked. x.x xD
I love it! <3 Great job girl!

Answer 5

Thank you girly. :) Thank you very very much ♥

Answer 6

♥ Keep Writing, and never stop! ♥

Answer 7

I do my best. Thanks again! <3<3

Answer 8

*-* Beaaaauuuuttttiiiifffuuullll *^* My lovez it su much <333333333

Answer 9

*falls off cliff*
Wut????
Thanks Emily!

Answer 10

It actualy kinda matches. I love it<3

Answer 11

It does?
Wowsa, thank you!

Answer 12

yea, sometimes i want to make a poem, but i cant make two words. Ugh

Answer 13

*two words rhyme

Answer 14

Don't ever be afraid to try because fear is usually an element holding every person back in what they clearly like.
I came up with this once:

"Fear is merely adrenaline
waiting to be used.
Nothing more, nothing less
is to be confused"

And I try to make it an everyday motto. :) @AloneS

Answer 15

yea a nice one ;)

Answer 16

:)

Answer 17

If I could be anything I would be your tear,
so I could be born in your eye,
live down your cheek and
die on your lips <3
Nice @Atsie
really appreciate your hard work

Answer 18

Thanks Mayan :)

Answer 19

Great job Atsie! ^¬^
Nice message! :D

Answer 20

Thanks Qwert :)

Answer 21

Astonishing :)

Answer 22

Good job @Atsie! <3

Answer 23

Thank you both so much! @AllieKat01 @marym2019

Answer 24

‎( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ATSIE WHAT THE HELL MAN

Answer 25

‎( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) MY POEMS ARE DEPRESSED AND TRAGIC AND YOUR POEMS ARE HAPPY

Answer 26

‎( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) BUT NO ONE BARELY KNOWS MY DAMN NAME

Answer 27

I have plenty of depressing poems Anaise, trust me. I weave all my emotions into words and I have a mix of depression, happiness, loneliness, and a lot of wonder about life......all of those I write about.
Don't beat yourself up for the things you write of because its perfectly alright. Whatever the world see's you as doesn't matter, but what you see yourself as matters and in the way you express yourself matters as well. Please don't compare your work to mine or anyone else's either. I've read your work, and you have a very beautiful way of writing even when your depressed. Trust me, I am able to see when someone has literary talent and you do. Use that talent and don't care what anyone thinks. You're poems make a person think anyways. A person can relate to your poems. I have and I ain't joking. @Anaise ♥♥