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OpenStudy (hope210):

My new poem!!!!! please comment what you think it is about :)

OpenStudy (hope210):

I feel so cold I feel so old, laying in bed pillow under head people around me, love surrounds me mere hours have past eyes drooping fast, take a hand make the moment last, tears run down faces regret acts as braces tied together like laces, all in one room will be grieving soon, I can't hold on no longer she says to me, knees go weak cannot speak breathe in breath deep keep it together I say to me, look up you're smiling at me " it's okay you can weep".

OpenStudy (ladycielphantomhive):

It's about someone dying (probably an older person). It seems to switch POV towards the end.

alones (alones):

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OpenStudy (hope210):

@ladycielphantomhive you are correct it switches POV because the person dying has past and the other person is trying to keep it together and break down in front of the other family members, but then they look up and see that the now deceased relative is standing in front of them smiling letting them know that everything will be okay and thy don't have to be strong anymore.

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