Question

What do you think about this new tune I made? https://soundcloud.com/alyssadomo/piano-thing-idk/s-uVbNz

Answer 1

@pooja195 @Atsie @ethane

Answer 2

Not bad! I like the rhythm of it, but it just feels lacking. If you try to add more to it, like a chord maybe, might make it feel more dramatic.

Try adding a crescendo from Mp to Forte. Then when you reach forte in the last measure, try doing the following:

A, G, F, G, F, E

Afterwards you're free to add onto however you want. You don't need to do this, but thats what I see on how to add more to it. :)

Answer 3

@ayeedomo

Answer 4

Thanks! I'll try that :)

Answer 5

@av0cad0

Answer 6

This is good. This is the beginning of a pretty common chord progression where you start with a minor chord and descend the first note of the chord a half step every time. If you take it down one more half step and then end the progression with an E chord, you'll complete the progression.

Answer 7

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