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OpenStudy (anonumus203):

i need help will give a medal

OpenStudy (slenderman):

hello

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

hi

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

can u help me recreat pomegranate seed in pluto point of view

OpenStudy (slenderman):

what English class is this

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

English 2

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

@quickstudent

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

do u want me to post the story??

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

You're talking about a story? OH.... I didn't get it at first.

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

What story is it?

OpenStudy (slenderman):

im just trying to figure out what your asking

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

yea i gotta recreate it in one of the charcters point of view and it cant be like the original well it can but i cant have alot of the orginal story in it

OpenStudy (slenderman):

oh i see its persophone and hades

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

yea and her mother and i got to choose one and write a new story in their point of view

OpenStudy (slenderman):

try doing it from the mothers point of view, her child didn't want to leave but went with hades into the underworld anyways

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

kay so how should it go and @quickstudent the story is pomegranate seed

OpenStudy (quickstudent):

I haven't heard of that story before..... never read it

OpenStudy (slenderman):

its the roman version of persophone and hades

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

yea

OpenStudy (slenderman):

im not much of a story writer but just try to imagine how your parent(s) would feal if you left for the underworld

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

im not very good at writing so i should be like waiting for hours for persphone to come home and realized she still haven't showed up i start to get worried and scared

OpenStudy (slenderman):

or or orrrrr maybe do it from hades's point, i mean think about finding a way for him to think hes doing good

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

so how should it go

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

as i walk around thinking how i should make her drink the water i sigh

OpenStudy (slenderman):

try rereading the story but make sure to pay special attention to what hades does, try thinking like him, how would hades do this, what would he do if this happened.

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

umm buh how do we do it in his point of view

OpenStudy (slenderman):

while writing it put I instead of Hades

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

okay can we write it out or sum because im still confused

OpenStudy (slenderman):

"Do not be afraid," i said to the girl, with as cheerful a smile as I knew how to put on. "Come! Will you not like to ride a little way with me, in my beautiful chariot?"

OpenStudy (slenderman):

dont do it like that you'll get plagiarism, i just copied and paste, then changed him into I

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

okay i wont but can u still help me finsih up some doe like create one

OpenStudy (slenderman):

im just giving some ideas but lets see if i can help some more

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

"Do not be afraid," i said to the girl, with as cheerful a smile as I knew how to put on a charming smile. "Come! Will you not like to ride a little way with me, in my beautiful golden chariot?" she looked at me and shaked her head sure and I smile and helped her on while my horses sped down into the underworld only leaving foot prints so whats your name I asked her and she said perspiona

OpenStudy (slenderman):

yes just like that

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

can u help me add more ??

OpenStudy (slenderman):

do you have to write the whole story?

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

"Do not be afraid," i said to the girl, with as cheerful a smile as I knew how to put on a charming smile. "Come! Will you not like to ride a little way with me, in my beautiful golden chariot?" she looked at me and shaked her head sure and I smile and helped her on while my horses sped down into the underworld only leaving foot prints so whats your name I asked her and she said Persephone and I said I was Pluto and when we arrived I to my castle I looked at her and seen the shock on my face while she looked at my big mansion that was black and red and it had lion door and lion statues with a water fall in the back and front and a pool and many cars and chariots parked in the front

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

well not the whole story like 3 para

OpenStudy (slenderman):

ok well you got 2 down, and you still on th reight track...good job

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

thanks but i got writers block i dont know what else to put

OpenStudy (slenderman):

"Pray do not be foolish, little dear," I said, in rather a sullen tone. "I offer you my palace and my crown, and all the riches that are under the earth; and you treat me as if I were doing you an injury. The one thing which my palace needs is a merry little damsel, to run upstairs and down, and cheer up the rooms with her smile.This is what i ask for you to do.”

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

"Do not be afraid," i said to the girl, with as cheerful a smile as I knew how to put on a charming smile. "Come! Will you not like to ride a little way with me, in my beautiful golden chariot?" she looked at me and shaked her head sure and I smile and helped her on while my horses sped down into the underworld only leaving foot prints so whats your name I asked her and she said Persephone and I said I was Pluto and when we arrived I to my castle I looked at her and seen the shock on my face while she looked at my big mansion that was black and red and it had lion door and lion statues with a water fall in the back and front and a pool and many cars and chariots parked in the front and I offered her a drink and she said no and I frowned at her and said okay then I told one of my servants to put the water in everything she can find her food in her bathroom etc and I showed her around and after a while she started to cry which made me irritated because she missed her mother and I locked her into the room

OpenStudy (slenderman):

oh wow

OpenStudy (slenderman):

that escalated quickly

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

yea

OpenStudy (slenderman):

well you definatley got this down

OpenStudy (anonumus203):

yea but i still need help

OpenStudy (slenderman):

On went the chariot,I was immensely pleased to find myself once more in my own realm. I drew Proserpina's attention to the rich veins of gold that were to be seen among the rocks, and pointed to several places where one stroke of a pickaxe would loosen a bushel of diamonds. All along the road, indeed, there were sparkling gems, which would have been of inestimable value above ground, but which here were reckoned of the meaner sort and hardly worth a beggar's stooping for.

OpenStudy (rainbowdash1145):

can someone help me? HELP PLEASE I need help with this question: Which of the following subject-verb agreement is correct? A. Her intelligence or her warmth attracts many friends. B. My mom or my dad pick me up from school. C. The dentist or his assistant clean your gums. D. The licorice or the gum rot my teeth. I think it's B, but I am still indecisive.

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