Question

Don't care much for rhyme scheme

Answer 1

Mother of mine
Her silver is pure, her silk is fine
She comforts me most
When I’m wrong, pained, and agonized
When my heart was sought into shards of ruby
By little boys who excuse themselves
She showed me how pretty, and graceful I could be
Mother of mine
Problems of her own, her tears shined
Mother of mine needed a happy fairytale
But her prince was nightmarous
He had women before mother of divine
Bore children with all of them
By raising their skirts, by the hem
Mother of mine cried
He bore a child with her, and went off to hide
A ring of promise
Was a ring of demise
Mother of the fine, stayed loyal and admirable
To her late husband’s family and her child
But her pain wasn’t away
Instead, in her little one, the pain smiled
She watched her grow up, the pain didn’t go away
She hid it better
Mother of mine cried, her daughter carried her hurt

Answer 2

That one didn't turn out the way I wanted it to

Answer 3

Dear mom, I’m sorry
I couldn’t stop you from evil’s nails
I had my bed to offer
When father, wasn’t very nice
I gave you my pillow to shed your tears
Maybe our tears together would wash away fears
It’s hard to carry family weight
It was too heavy for me, I needed a crate
I dumped them deep inside my heart
For them to show up later again
Sprouting up like a geiser
Getting higher, and higher
Destined to show up again
I hate it when you cry
I’ll devote the rest of my life
To dry up your eyes
And curve the lips of your mouth
It’s my blood oath
For my mother, I owe it to

Answer 4

Nice poem. almost made me cry (and that's saying something) :)

Answer 5

These two made me cry and I normally don't cry, So a million thumbs up to you :)

Answer 6

No rhyme, thumbs down

Answer 7

On a serious note, I was 12% teary

Beautiful work Ana :)

Answer 8

my thumbs up are OVER NINE-THOUSAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND!

Answer 9

did you even wash your thumbs before putting them up...

Answer 10

...maybe...

Answer 11

no. no I didn't.

Answer 12

these are so amazing, you should be very proud :)

Answer 13

*^* Beautiful work Ani <3