Question

So... I have been trying to get back into writing. I currently have one very very short poem that i have written. Who wants to read it?

Answer 1

could i read it?

Answer 2

sure. I will be sure to send it your way sometime today. Thanks!

Answer 3

Here you go:

My heart screams in agony and pain
I hope that my love is not in vain
My love for him is gone
For I know I have done something wrong
I hope and pray that we can mend
A relationship that has always been
My heart is now broken
And is left unspoken
I will love him forever
Even though things will never get any better

Answer 4

looks good sorry my pc has been frozen for some time now

Answer 5

your fine. Thanks. :) Just seeing what people think. Not to sure if I should get back into writing or not. lol.

Answer 6

i think you should

Answer 7

Thanks @TheCatMan! That really means a lot.

Answer 8

your poem is better than mine for sure.

Answer 9

might need to be converted its formatted in the 2003 version of Microsoft word

Answer 10

stop bumping dammit ‎( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Answer 11

ummm... ok @Anaise. @TheCatMan I absolutely love it! I don't think my work is all that great either. lol

Answer 12

I'm trying to become world famous for it ‎( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Answer 13

I am a licensed writer ‎( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Answer 14

Like I have a driver's license and I write ‎( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Answer 15

You don't like it?

Answer 16

‎( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Answer 17

‎( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) I'll take a wild guess and

You're heartbroken like me

Answer 18

thank jesus im fluttering lonely