Question

Please critique!

“The Meadow”

In this open meadow
I stand
Watching and waiting

Longing to see his face
To hold his hands
I feel his embrace

I know he loves me
I am the lock
He is the key

He opened my heart
He revealed my soul
Our love shall never fall apart
His love is my goal

In this meadow
We shall forever be
Where I met this fellow
We are each other’s every need

Answer 1

I love it. It's the best thing I ever read

Answer 2

Awww! Thank you! <3

Answer 3

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(thumbs up)

Answer 4

thanks

Answer 5

you should send this to a publisher ASAP its pure gold

Answer 6

Thank you @TheCatMan! <3