Question

Comments?
Link to the other songs:
http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/57bfc014e4b00e93acf4b6c2

Answer 1

Wow, very nice.

Answer 2

Are you lying

Answer 3

lol no. It sounds great.

Answer 4

Hope so lol

Answer 5

lol it's true!

Answer 6

And now, for the famous jay response.

Peanut Butter.

Answer 7

XD

Answer 8

\[\frac{ 10.5 }{ 10 }\]

Answer 9

Very excellent as @Nnesha stated above.

Answer 10

Lol really guys? Nnesha really?

Answer 11

yes really. imagine you're in blind audition
*turns* 10.5/10 ! :D

Answer 12

lol yes really Yana! It's excellent.

Answer 13

Lol well good. I wanna audition for America has talent lol

Answer 14

your voice is great :)

Answer 15

"I wanna audition for America has talent lol"

You should.

Answer 16

Awe thanks sweetburger. an idk bout that lol

Answer 17

Nice work.

Answer 18

Ill never forget you Nnesha an thanks Pooja

Answer 19

It's wonderful @YanaSidlinskiy astonishing :)

Answer 20

Nice :)

Answer 21

Thank you thank you everyone ;)

Answer 22

Amazing !!

Answer 23

Is it, Andre? ;)

Answer 24

Yes !!

Answer 25

Girl! You've got talent.

Answer 26

Andre is stalking me lol and thank you:*** ^^^^^

Answer 27

AWESOMENESS

Answer 28

;) fall in love ;)

Answer 29

;D

Answer 30

😝😮😮😮😮

Answer 31

What Andre/

Answer 32

Very good! Wow! What denomination are you?

Answer 33

Awe thank you and Romanian. Why do you ask? I got an accent? Lol

Answer 34

No, I was just wondering :)

Answer 35

Oh lol ok.

Answer 36

This is good. You never specified if you wrote this so I'll save my song structure critiquing for when you confirm that.

You're voice has a lot of potential. From what I've heard it sounds like you would benefit from some breath control exercises particularly in the lower registers. Very often when there's breath control issues it will transfer over to pitch problems which is the case hear. I would suggest practicing long clear tones in scales while holding each note out as long as you possibly can. There's lot's of other exercises to help with this but I think this is on of the most effective. Also, make sure to really support those higher notes or the start to sound "whiny" for lack of a better word. Really, Great work though. Keep it up

Answer 37

Awe thank you. And no I didn't write the song. It's a cover.

Answer 38

are you singing it

Answer 39

@YanaSidlinskiy amazing... Finally impressed :)

Answer 40

Yes guys. That's my singing with a friend of mine.

Answer 41

Amazing! It's a hundred times better than I could ever pull off x'D (cuz I can't sing for my life... despite being a jigglypuff) I like the harmonizing ^_^ (although you wouldn't get to show that off at an audition)
I'm impressed by the talent we've got in our mod and ambi teams <3
You're a true gem hun :)

Answer 42

My presence was requested, so here I am...

0.13 the transition from one of the notes to the next was uneven which produced an out of tune feeling
0.34 "to" it felt a little too deep for your range and did not produce with as much tone as your other words
0.38 trembling a lil, could cover it with vibrato if you get around to learning it
0.45 the reverb become obvious and the added voice is just a tad bit out of tune with the first (which created an unpleasant scuffing vibe)
1.06 the out of tuneness is more obvious here, and there seems to be a tiny timing delay that might contribute to the tuning
1.11 hit the note a little out of tune
1.55 you can take that to an audition - it's good
2.02 there's an imbalance
2.12 blub in the second voice
2.20 "you" in the second voice, might be out of tune
2.24 the top voice seemed fine but somewhere in the harmony seemed to be out of tune
2.35 voice went flat, this one I know for sure ^_^"
2.48-53 out of tune (not that much)
2.56 lower note didn't come out in time
3:10 some waivering in the pitch (tuning wise, vibrato is ok)
3:35 when harmonizing with yourself, agree with yourself where you want to breathe in both voices
3:42 a slight out of tune waiver, you could be trying to add it for effect but out of tune is not the same as a controlled vibrato

I think I missed some stuff... I haven't retuned my ears in a while, plus I'm sick - so take it as what you will, almost all the duet parts seemed to be out of tune with each other the tiniest bit (because if it was completely intune, then in some parts I shouldn't be able to tell that there are two voices). I've never listened to the original song (so I don't know what it's supposed to sound like), so there's that too. Sometimes I feel like there's no enough depth in the high notes, it's whispy and maybe that's the effect you wanted for this song - but don't audition with an effect like that... the more tone the better.

you mentioned wanting to audition, and I'd say, go for it. Auditioning is always a good experience to have (even if you don't make it).

Keep singing, I've heard worse and won't mind listening again.

Answer 43

Timing girl!! TIMING!!!
That's what my teacher always told me. :3

Other than that, it was great! Harmonizing was superb! *ok hand* :)
Try other Lauren Daigle songs, your voice will fit the key. :)

Answer 44

Thanks, Jiggly. Sleepyhead, thanks for your input. Comparing you to a professional vocal teacher, you guys were off in ALOT of places.. Especially with the coming in or whatever. It's good I guess, to have both sides. I mean, I've had a professional vocalist listen to this and give criticism on this and deciding on the debate, you sleepyhead and the vocalist professional were VERY off. Who to believe? I don't know lol.

Answer 45

Believe the professionals, I haven't touched music in a year now (cuz I failed my audition for the college wind ensemble). My ears can be out of wack xD (and I don't sing, I play an instrument, where the difficulties are different etc).

Answer 46

Okeii, jiggly. An awe. Well I'm sure you'll succeed in whatever it is.

Answer 47

Amazing.. but i can't sing to save my life.

Answer 48

Amazing! and soothing!
Great work :)

Answer 49

;) Thanks hartnn

Answer 50

pretty unreal, not gonna lie, can i hire you to sing for my birthday party

Answer 51

my ears are satisfied with the amazingness of your awesome voice, magnificent singing, i could listen to this superb, majestic, and breathtaking song all day long, this is pure brilliance, striking and splendid indeed. this is a majestic piece @YanaSidlinskiy

Answer 52

They say it's a God-given talent😉😉😊😊(;Awe thank you!!! Makin me cry? But yes deep thanks to you, Means alot to me.

Answer 53

Sounds lit Yana! Prosto ymnichka! ;)

Answer 54

Awe, thanks Agl hahha ;) Ti tozhe lol

Answer 55

Amazing, truly amazing.

Answer 56

Greatly thankful for your comments as well <3

Answer 57

WOW YANA *_* This is amazing. Your voice is great. Pure talent. So glad i've been your friend for a long time lol. Even tho i vanish a lot inbetween hahahah xD. But seriously this is amazing. Xfactor is waiting for you hahaha xD

Answer 58

Lol, by any chance, do I have to pay to get in?

Answer 59

#inthefeels now. Amazing. *heart tears emoji*

Answer 60

Amazing Yana. Amazing. *-*-*

Answer 61

thanks guys... Sadly someone closed this post...

Answer 62

This is a nice song. Incredible ears sleepy. This song is played in the key of Ab, or G# as some people name it differently, and the progression is as follows:
Verse:1-6-5
Chorus: 1-5-6-4
Correct?

Answer 63

I don't get it... ^^

Answer 64

What i mean by the 1-6-5 progression is that you're playing the 1st chord to the 6th chord to the 5th chord in the progression. In this case, it's Ab (1) to F (6) to Eb (5). The numbers represent the chord you're playing from the root note.

Answer 65

OH, yes yes.

Answer 66

^-^