Question

Trevor has invited Samantha to go to the ice cream shop. Create at least four lines of effective dialogue between them that are punctuated and capitalized correctly, and include taglines.

Answer 1

how is my dialoge?
"Hey, samantha want to go to the ice cream parlor with me?" Trevor asked samantha while riding there bike down a small slope." Sure, Trevor! Thanks for inviting me thats so nice of you!" Gives a grin to Trevor, then he replies "alright then, race you!" Samantha replies "oh, no you don't!" *rides down pass him towards the parlor, dead stops in front "h-hey, wait up! "Trevor calls out, breathes heavly by trying to gasp for air "now." Opens the door for samantha, then goes in after her. As they approch the counter where the cashier is standing on the other side, Trevor politely askes, "two chocolate ice cream cones with sprinkles on top, please?" The cashier cashes in there order, and he pays for the ice creams "thank you!" Samantha thanks him "thank you, Trevor" He replies "you're welcome buddy."

Answer 2

I'm not sure what grade you're in or what schooling you are doing but so far I've read the first 2 sentences, this is pretty good. I want you to get the best grade so, here's so fixes. Try to capitalize the 1st letter of the names. Samantha, Trevor etc. it shows that you know your grammar. 2nd, if you make someone do something, make sure that you say who does it, I got a bit confused when you said "Gives a grin a Trevor" say "As she grins at Trevor" or something like that. Make sure you capitalize the 1st letter of every sentence, example: "Finally, have ice cream." instead of "finally we can have ice cream." I'm not trying to be mean but, here's some grammar errors, I'll fix them for you :) 1. That's* 2. Heavily* 3. Approach* Hope this helps you :)

Answer 3

"Hey, Samantha do you want to go to the ice cream parlor with me?" Trevor asked Samantha while riding their bikes down a small slope." Sure, Trevor! Thanks for inviting me that's so nice of you!" she replied while giving a grin to Trevor, then he replies "Alright then, race you!" Samantha replies "oh, no you don't!" as she rides past him as their heading for the parlor "h-hey, wait up! "Trevor calls out, breathes heavily by trying to gasp for air "now." Opens the door for Samantha, then goes in after her. As they approach the counter where the cashier is standing on the other side, Trevor politely asks, "two chocolate ice cream cones with sprinkles on top, please?" The cashier cashes in their order, and he pays for the ice creams "thank you!" Samantha thanks him "thank you, Trevor" He replies "you're welcome buddy."


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