Question

Grammar Check Please :)

Answer 1

Hello, i have a few sentences i would like your help on :)

Answer 2

The seventeen-year locusts (have descended) on (our town and) their noise actually (drowns) out my daughter’s music

Answer 3

The parenthesis show what might be wrong

Answer 4

@Jadeishere @TheWaffleBRO

Answer 5

It looks correct to me. Are there other choices that might fit better?

Answer 6

it looks correct unless there might be other choices you can pick from

Answer 7

Exactly what zeidyt said.

Answer 8

I think its fine (;

Answer 9

just use in instead of on in the beginning