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OpenStudy (pleasehelpme101):

Grammar Check Please :)

OpenStudy (pleasehelpme101):

Hello, i have a few sentences i would like your help on :)

OpenStudy (pleasehelpme101):

The seventeen-year locusts (have descended) on (our town and) their noise actually (drowns) out my daughter’s music

OpenStudy (pleasehelpme101):

The parenthesis show what might be wrong

OpenStudy (pleasehelpme101):

@Jadeishere @TheWaffleBRO

OpenStudy (cobaltthunder267):

It looks correct to me. Are there other choices that might fit better?

OpenStudy (zeidyt):

it looks correct unless there might be other choices you can pick from

OpenStudy (studytheworld):

Exactly what zeidyt said.

NvidiaIntely (nvidiaintely):

I think its fine (;

OpenStudy (sophiab):

just use in instead of on in the beginning

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