Question

If I can't write to inspire, to warn, to discuss, and to be free-spirited, than I might as well not write at all.

Answer 1

AIR UNTO FREEDOM

Travel the cavern of your mind
wherest secret thoughts
and most precious secrets dwell.
Where life is within motion
liken the chains to wheels
and breakaway on adventures tell.
For the forest in longing
only grows old again
as patience for you fades away;
And whatever wilts now further
the strands slip from hands
as wise to a never changing gray.
Seeketh what cannot wait
either and whether in stormy shine
or upon a wandering dark;
As rust can only silver a more
and each opposite an opposite
now in clear and stark.

Answer 2

We have one life to explore, one life to find out who we are, and one life to make another eternally.
If we don't live this one life, then everything around us will gray faster than we do.

Answer 3

Wow. This is amazing. I love how you decided to make certain lines rhyme. It really emphasized them. A+!

Answer 4

Thank you :)

Answer 5

Oh my goodness! I just realized that it was supposed to say "most precious tears dwell." It repeats 'secrets' twice! Woops!

Answer 6

it still sounds great

Answer 7

*clap* clap*Clap*

Answer 8

Very Nice work -pats you on back- :)

Answer 9

Thank you both :)

Answer 10

You have this weird clunky way of writing.
The lines always feel a little longer or more descriptive than they need be.
It's a wonderful style. :)

I love it.

Answer 11

Thank you for commenting on my clunkiness, ^.^

Answer 12

That is awsome

Answer 13

Why thank you :) @20leejt

Answer 14

your welcome

Answer 15

Wow, you write in your own unique special way! I really like your poems, their simplicity, their depth, and their meanings! And here another wonderful piece:D Well done!

Answer 16

Wow, that's surprising to hear you say that! @quickstudent I really appreciate your kind words! Thank you! ^.^

Answer 17

Wow Amazing! :D

Answer 18

Thank you!! @Awolflover1 ^.^

Answer 19

Amazing work!!! you are inspiring!

Answer 20

@Qwert2
You are the third person to have said that to me this week. I feel so blessed to even be able to write let alone hear such amazing words! Thank you so much! ^o^ ♥